Comment by FreakyHorse on Ghost Gate - Chapter 12

Comment on ChapterGhost Gate - Chapter 12
Forget it, the inner dialogue is A**, "show, don't tell" this can be so perfectly made. Why does it have to treat us like kids and explain what we just saw? "Why isn't manager is here?" "he was Infront of me"

Completely ruins the immersion and cuts the feeling of horror, just imagine those panels without monologue and it'll be better.
Don't get offended by my comments, i wrote them mostly when I'm sleep deprived

I'm guy that's bored, english it's not my native language.
Pls read: Wolf in the house, you won't regret it

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