The site won't let me leave a review so I'll just post a comment! It's a 4 star for me, honestly I think the story like was pretty good. I liked how independent and capable the FL is. I also didn't expect the twist ending, so that's a nice touch! I do this the second ML is better the the first. He seems to spend more quality time with the FL and they have great chemistry! It lost a star because the ML and FL relationship didn't feel like it was really based on anything.