Comment by DrDrako on Rebel against the harem

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DrDrako
DrDrako·1 week ago

@Rebel against the harem the problem is that its always the perfect plan. If the MCs actions caused some vulnerability or flaw in that plan that would be one thing, but it always ends up proceeding as if the MC did nothing but somehow accelerated.  

If the MCs actions don't have any actual effect due to plot contrivance it means there are no stakes to begin with.