At first it's a pretty cool manga and drawing, but there's a totally weird confusion with time.
Author manages time in this manga terribly stupidly. MC says (chapter 1) that he has been dead for 15 years! Then in chapter 2 he finds out that his friend was the head alchemist... 20 years ago???!!! That means that he stopped being 5 years before his death but the MC doesn't know that... And it turns out that people have forgotten 90% of techniques that were obvious during the main character's life: that is ONLY 15 years earlier!!! In chapter 10 alchemist thinks about a LEGENDARY technique received from MC. LEGENDARY! means FORGOTTEN, MYTHICAL and ONLY 15 YEARS have passed. I would understand if 500 years had passed and not 15. Absurdity of absurdities, I totally don't know what this is about.
Author manages time in this manga terribly stupidly. MC says (chapter 1) that he has been dead for 15 years! Then in chapter 2 he finds out that his friend was the head alchemist... 20 years ago???!!! That means that he stopped being 5 years before his death but the MC doesn't know that... And it turns out that people have forgotten 90% of techniques that were obvious during the main character's life: that is ONLY 15 years earlier!!! In chapter 10 alchemist thinks about a LEGENDARY technique received from MC. LEGENDARY! means FORGOTTEN, MYTHICAL and ONLY 15 YEARS have passed. I would understand if 500 years had passed and not 15. Absurdity of absurdities, I totally don't know what this is about.
