He should've just stopped at "I think you're beautiful" 
Reading Yaoi is one addiction I would never be cured of.
Things I consider when I read:
1. Art
2. Sm ut
3.Toxicness
4. Red flags
5. Did I mention sm ut already?
6. Only 2 person on the cover page.
so true...I mean..duh bro please control yourself n your speech bubble