Comment by princeinthewoods on Pian Pian (Yaoi) - Chapter 66

Comment on ChapterPian Pian (Yaoi) - Chapter 66

Wow... I'm actually hate this story. What happened? Like... I want to know wtf the author was thinking when putting things together like this. Its not even just that the situation is bad, the actual quality and story is... terrible. So many wrong and unnecessary decisions so late in the game.

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You are making me madder than this story go read bj alex bi*** or killing stalking then we can talk

@Kalo ka Da** fiesty but your totally right that bi*** should know other manhwas first plus honestly I can see this happening more in real life 😉
@Anne  I've read both of those multiple times. The fuc*** up situations in those manhwas don't make the stupid situations in this one any less stupid or unnecessarily fuc*** up (and in general just poorly written/developed).
@princeinthewoods sis just go read something else u have no hope in bl world
@Kalo ka  "sis just go read something else you have no hope in the bl world" sis, all I ever read is bl, and I've read some absolutely amazing stories that I want to return back to all the time. The writing, characters, plots, and everything are so well-though out, developed, and written. Plus the s** scenes are miles better. So when I say that aspects of this story specifically are not very good and the characters are pretty blatantly idiotic for the sake of forcing drama and disingenuous tension, that's what I mean. It has nothing to do with my stance on BL's in general. Sometimes bad writing is just bad writing no matter what the genre is. I just think it's weird how hard y'all are defending THIS bl out of all the other genuinely amazing ones there are. This one is just... subpar..
@Andy_light Andy HAAAAARD facts with Jinx lmao, cannot STAAAAAND that story. ut I'm saying those other ones (haven't read the last one you mentioned) at least have good writing with character moments that make sense and allow for the horrible moments to come in a way that's understandable. Not justifiable or redeemable, but understandable. This one was just throwing random stuff at the wall because they were looking at the book of "Yaoi Tropes and Traditional Drama" when it was either poorly executed or completely unneeded in the story that were thrown in out of nowhere because that's what every random yaoi story does lmao.
@Andy_light Andy Oh wait, nevermind I thought you were talking about Love Jinx lol. Jinx is veeeery difficult to read because no matter how gorgeous the art is and stunning the ML is, he's still an annoying selfish bas**** who I want to kick in the di** everytime I see him lmao, but the difference is, I know that this is coming from the creators of BJ Alex, and they're very talented, so I'm patiently holding out for the moment when he becomes so mentally and emotionally dependent on Doc Dans affection and becomes so utterly tortured by his inevitable absense resulting from his abuse, that he forces himself to completely change his ideals and personality to give Dan a perfect existence for the rest of his life and make him genuinely fall in love with him lmao. I just love stories where the piece of sh** becomes uncontrollably whipped by the loveable MC that he has no choice but to stop being a piece of sh**, and to instead become perfect boyfriend materia to keep them in his life.
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ILIKEBIGBALLSANDSOME·2 years ago
@princeinthewoods lmao this bicth wasting her time writing some comment on the authors designs and decisions lmao if you don't like the fuc*** story don't FUC**** read it💀