Comment by The Gae Fae tm on In The Deep - Chapter 35

Comment on ChapterIn The Deep - Chapter 35
I want more murderous borther and less i wanna fack my brother -_- i know they're not related by blood but the s** iss just to much at this point! AND THE THING IS this has great potentical, the set up with the younger brother being infected, and his older brother being a vessel for some eldritch horror. THIS HAS THE POTENCIAL TO BE A GREAT STORY, the author just needs to expliot the polt they've already got i hope this happens

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@The Gae Fae tm

totally agree.  There needs to be more intrigue in the actual story.