Comment by deadpoet on Toxin - Chapter 13

Comment on ChapterToxin - Chapter 13
No offence, but whats up with people being confused in the comments? It's been very clear so far that the ML is attracted to the MC, and he is in conflict with himself because of that, it's a fact that he does not want to admit to himself. To potentially be crushing on a member of a tribe that he despises with his entire being? Wasn't on his bucket list for the year.

So, easiest solution to that "problem" for him is to just get rid of the MC altogether. I agree with the MC that something had to have happened in the past involving the imae, which turned the ML into this psychopath. Though, I wouldn't be too surprised either if that doesn't turn out to be the case 'cause some people do just be crazy for the sh!ts and giggles.

Everyone here seems to really hate the ML, something I can't fault any of you for, but honest to G0d, he is the most interesting character in this, so I hope he won't be killed off just so the MC can get together with the second lead. 🥴

As for why MC is acting like this: 1) Getting the ML to sleep with him so he can get that "imae poison" and die is the very reason he is here to begin with. 2) He is distressed and not in the right state of mind lol.
picky reader

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@deadpoet I agree with everything you said, it's so refreshing to see someone who thinks like me and knows how to enjoy a good story. Like where is the fun if everyone was a green flag? This is not a fluffy bl