You know if the story actually went that way and she just got to go out and live a great life in a nice home in the countryside. I would be ok with that. When your main character thinks a story is so bad she wants out, doesn't say much about what you are writing.
That said I like a lot of this story so far but we shoudl be at like chapter 15-20, instead of chapter 44. 44 chapters is way too many for the male lead to only get caveman talk.