This piece reads like the writer started with no plan and finished with no purpose. The plot is not just confused—it’s a patchwork of borrowed tropes and mismatched ideas, desperately stitched together in the hope that chaos might pass for complexity. It's painfully clear the writer has mistaken imagination for skill, and enthusiasm for competence. Whatever ambition existed here has collapsed under the weight of poor execution, weak structure, and an utter lack of understanding of the genre. If this is their idea of serious writing, they are profoundly unready for it.
