Comment by Cheesecake00 on Love is an Illusion! - Superstar - Chapter 27

Comment on ChapterLove is an Illusion! - Superstar - Chapter 27
Haaaa can I say something really offensive??? The author is not competent at all reading this spin off made me remind wy I dropped love is an illusion so many times, because the author just wanted to keep it cute while actually not giving it a cute plot , seriously using hyesungs trauma so byul could have his first kiss? I am practicing writing myself but even for an amateur like me this story line is sh** because the author just brushes the surface never actually going deep into the problem to solve it , this story really sucks
Dangerous convenience store will always be my comfort manhwa

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@Cheesecake00 I don't agree ...I write myself but this is literally her style of work.... And I don't see anything wrong with it after analysing
@Cheesecake00 if you dropped 'love is an illusion' it's all on you. Tons of people loved that manhwa, that's the whole reason we had 2 side stories till now. And about the "amateur" writing, the kiss was to comfort byul not to romanticise his trauma. For someone with pathetic perspective and ignorance you don't seem to be a writer like you praise yourself to be.
@Scaramouche i get what you mean but i still think cheescake has a point. I mean I still dont get why hyesung just forgave both his husband and son for that (in my eyes) sort of betrayel. Although I have to say with love is an illusion its better with the plot than here but yeah a bit more drama would be a lot better. Oh and most importantly, you can say your opnion but you dont have to get disrespectfull.
@Cheesecake00 as an author myself it isnt that bad but obviously we cant just hate on ppls art works yk it gives them less motivation n shi plus its her way of writing if u dont like it do it ur way write ur OWN makes plot the way u like them to be and not hate or put down the author's work
@Stay you're not wrong i was upset and mad as well but theres nth we can do yk the way the author writes it seems pretty mature to me like its how things work in the real world if u ask me he cant leave he got 2 kids n a husband like ppl could like look down on u for things like that bc yk how most ppl dont got like a life n sh** they needa do lmao plus as an author myself i wouldnt use plots like that to make the mc and ml kiss or wtv shes doing but its clearly her style and way of writing and making the story interesting and viral btw so theres no need to hate i mean if she doesnt like it that much she shouldnt be reading since like what? the 1st session
@Stay so you mean to say that I was being disrespectful but cheesecake wasn't? What a heck of an opinion. I too was mad at the betrayal after he specifically told them not to. But in life when you're a family, you will forgive them even if you've been betrayed and that's exactly why I think it's realistic and not amateur.
@Scaramouche i didnt say that but if it did sound like i did my bad gng
@Scaramouche I deeply apologise I wasn't trying to be disrespectful to the author but as I've learnt that what you think is what you write, I'll be honest and say that the trauma should have a deeper solution not just saying sorry because that was a big big big deal in the main story but in this spin off it became ignored which was not smart of the author even though I dropped several times but I still completed it and I'm still here reading the spin off but it's funny I know but relate it to real life and think if someone's trauma which was a really big deal becomes nothing for no reason I really wished to see them have a deeper conversation hyesung deserved a conversation and dojin and byul owed an apology yes my opinion is different I agree I myself is an emotional person that's why I got ikcy , once again I'm very sorry
@Cheesecake00 i mean you're not wrong thats true but yk at the end of the day we cant do nothing n just wait for the new chaps or leave it sadly
@Minoru once again I'm sorry we all have different perspectives and opinions but hopefully we'll have better chapters