Comment by [Redacted] on Dangerous Convenience Store - Chapter 16

Comment on ChapterDangerous Convenience Store - Chapter 16
[Redacted]
[Redacted]·4 years ago
Ch. 16

Heavenly demon: Joe
Crocodile Joe: yah, who said that
 Heavenly demon:  it is I the Heavenly demon your inheritance
Crocodile Joe: Really! what my power gonna be?

 Heavenly demon: I'll give you the power to feal Qi, with it you will be able to cultivate.

Crocodile Joe: g** damnit, cultivateion. Why cultivateion. I don't want that sissy energy breathing sh**.

 Heavenly demon: you are lucky to inherit my power as the heav-
Crocodile Joe: shut up. Oi [Redacted]!

Crocodile Joe: Oi, I know you're up there wrighting this. So answer me.

[Redacted]: yeah what is it?

Crocodile Joe: 'didn't think that would actually work' *cough*, anyway, give me a different one
[Redacted]: a different what?

Crocodile Joe: a different inheritance, this one's too weak.

[Redacted]: well I can't un summen the H. D.

Crocodile Joe: just give it to Maria, she's dew for an inheritance anyway.

Maria the maid: thank you sir.

[Redacted]: anyway you still need an inheritance. You legally need one now.

Crocodile Joe: then give me something with crocodiles
[Redacted]: um ok let me look. Oh here's one, Alex from the story north of here. I haven't written anything from there yet but I can make this work. Just give me a day or two. In the meantime injoy this side story with the maid and HD
*I'll be doing it like this now*

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[Redacted]
[Redacted] ·4 years ago

side story with heavenly demon and maria is here
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12e1DRgmHDOB-HetoGrtKLDJzA2QbOoU-BpgkGuLajWI/edit