I feel like- this should honestly be re-written and have more depth into it. This, and I'll be as honest as I can-, sucked. A lot. But there's still potential no matter how you see it. So- idk, maybe if the characters personality had more thought and the story/ending go through 10 upgrades......this could of actually be an amazing BL story
Comment by Chrollo on Obey Me (Milknono) - Chapter 2 : extra2
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Because nothing memorable even happened in here, now I did like Yoo Gyuh-Wool because he's literally my kink but that's all I enjoyed from the story. I know theres -85% chance that this story will ever be re-written but I still honestly think that's what it needs and I would read it