Comment by Writecraft on Rebirth: City Deity - Chapter 1: Rebirth

Comment on ChapterRebirth: City Deity - Chapter 1: Rebirth

Hmm... the translation it's not bad, weird it might just have been the prolonge. The story isn't really that thrilling though, like really you've been alive for eons and might have lived multiple lifetimes and yet all you want to do is sacrifice everything you've achieved to correct some of your actions in one of your lifetimes? Now that's petty, really want to get that 100% I guess.