I'm about to go OFF right now so sit down with me because SOOOO many things are wrong with this. Firstly we all know that authors tend to to make the main characters attractive. Can I point out that, the black background characters have regular curly hair and her comes the cow boy with straight hair. Personally it was an infuriating sight to see and before you say " oh Cresent it's not that deep! " IT IS. I would have preferred if all the background ppl had straight hair, I'm not saying it's better(so don't put words in my mouth) but if I had to unfortunately choose, I would rather all of them have straight hair than the cow boy being the only one have straight hair compared to the rest of them. Secondly....are we mad????. I am the first in my bloodline to witness a bl about slavery between the slave Master and a slave. This is literally like that one gacha vid and bro was FLAMED for it and you really picked yourself up and said yes! Let's do this! This is horrible and to anyone defending or dismissing it( I'm talking about you " I LOVE FEMBOYS, mody_k6, 7y_0x1, Trashpandaaa, Sora, ZAVISI, Bjj_bunny, Chacco, mgdae, I live for yaoi, Rilka and many many more" ) and saying don't judge it by the first chapter. The moment slavery was brought in, wrap it up. The cruelty they have lived through for years and you are going to make a bl to what? Water it down, make it seems like even in the dark there was some light? H*L NO. I was actually so excited thinking it was going to be like Dead or Alive just to get shot in the face and up my a*s by a rocket launcher. This needs to go on a never ending hiatus. Right now. I was actually so shocked and I have never messaged my friend so fast.