MACDONALD

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Wth,why this story getting out of sense tho,like ,wth,AHHAHAHAHAHA,Fornsome reason the story line feel so rushed and weird
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Devoline
1 year ago
@Devoline I understand, but as I read a ton of storylines, some authors just do not realize that the readers are reading with rational thinking, and when they realize it ,they can change something that is already part of the story.So its better to just forgot the bad plot to make the story more entertaining.
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