Man, They Need To Put The Comedy Tag On This Manga, Cause This Sh** Is A Joke     BOOM!

In all seriousness I couldn't finish the first chapter.

I wait, I wait 20 years for a upload and I only get a **.2 chapter. Back to waiting ig

Yawn*

Yahn, missing ch 1 - 18.

I wouldn't recommend reading this, only exception is if you are deathly bored. Idk why they make the main characters children then proceed to make them do and have adult thoughts. I don't want to spoil it for that one person who will read it, just know I give it a 2-3/10. Arts good and story is good, just the fact the MC's are children ruins the whole thing.

I feel scammed. It's pfp has them as adults, they are indeed not adults chapter 1.

Before they were bad with it, even worse now. I mean, how the fu** he even get there? Now he says they have to pay some dumb price. No official visit, nor does he have the authority to try and stick such a large debt on them, by his self by the way.

Hmm, still need more chapters. It's very good.

Beyond horrible, disgusting even. Story is wayyyy out of wack, nothing makes sense, art feels just as bad. If AI helps make a dope story cool, BUT DONT USE AI FOR THE ENTIRE FUC**** THING. Idk where this came from but the uploader is just about as responsible for uploading this Garbo, even if they were paid to.

I cant Concentrate on what's going on because someone this manga doesn't like loading certain pages. No issues with any of the other ones I read before this.

We need a AI tag / label

This chapter is a blo*** mess. This manga is going to die instantly when it starts dying. Basically no good story or writing just regular a** scenes from literally every manga just like this. Wow she goes to get mercs and what do you know? Someone comes in dying, she saves them, and they become her guards. Not only that this "Carl" is "one of the few adventures who can easily cross the border, what luch that is. And they are instantly in a different country, no added story, no meat, so soup, just straight to the next very common scene. I've dropped this work next chapter, just reading it to see if I'm wrong.

Hmm, felt really forced / rushed. There are some details but not even remotely enough. No originality, as a kid she's given powers, powers get taken away by greedy, greedy country and family, had a engagement with the prince, grew up, family hates / care not for her, she's banished / engagement broken, and some other "handsome" guy already talking to her. 
  Next plot is they find out it's useless without her, as she's in the new country a series of events will lead a prince or a Duke(probably prince since she was first engaged to one) to get treated or find her shop and try fall for her after they see what she's capable of.

Dropped it*

Lol couldn't even read half of this chapter without disappointment. I stayed, hoping the 2nd chapter wouldn't be one of those "s** scenes" and yet here it is. My favorite part is the absolute gall of the author, this is a Ra** scene and low-key should be treated as such. Just because you made the bossy chick want to do it last second with the lame as excuse she was "curious" doesn't mysteriously make it ok. He was doing it regardless of her will AND with slave magic was going to force her. 
  I'm predicting it, when the 10 minutes is up she's going to see him in a more favorable light or is going to become his "s** slave", and that's how he gets the rest of them in the cover art. If you actually like abpnd read this sh**, go see a therapist man, you need it!

We got chapter 16, still not chapters 1 - 14

Hm, so far I love it. It's not making her look way to old for her current age and, and I hope it stays this way, they don't try to make her act like these 5 years old at every givin moment that its just off putting to a point that I quit reading. The soul letting itself disappear was a really good move.