Jinora

Jinora

Joined 26/06/2024

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For me I think the problem is the tone. I can't tell if she wants to kill herself or not.
Let's say she wants to kill herself and is depressed, the female lead should show signs of one's who has given up on life. And the way I interpreted this story is that the girl is not sure of what she wants.
Too contradictive
You know I Have read so much in novels where they will say they found a gold mine and are suddenly rich.
I guess yhe best way to teach us how to find money is by explaining at least how to get rich. I hate how you make having money like it's a simple thing.
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