Savid

Savid

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Viper - Ch. 22

and blocked. That simple. This weird blone mf need to get THE F*K out his life.

Bro didn't even run that fast when his mom woke up after YEARS, but starts dashing like Usain Bolt when he sees the man who sees him as property... right

Seo cashapp, venmo, zelle, paypal, what do you have? Boutta send you that 2k, 'cause no way you're doing all that when you could be getting that money working your a*s off in like two jobs.

Yk this lowkey motivational. Strive to never be so broke that I got my a*s up in the heavens, licking liquor off the floor for some dough- oh, h*l nah.

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Cassie
1 week ago

@Cassie If you have to fill every plot hole with "imagination," that's a telltale sign of weak writing, not a lack of creativity on the reader's part. The author simply lacks the skill to build a coherent story that doesn't rely entirely on psychological and sexual angst. While the premise is interesting, it isn't a novel idea, and it certainly isn't immune to critique, because it still isn't great. The comment section exists for sharing opinions (crazy concept, I know), so I'm completely entitled to share mine as you do yours.

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@Savid gosh reading is all about making the things up yourself. You lack creativity and...

When will this circle of torment ever end?? Dude, even if it's consensual, consent doesn't mean the person isn't being harmed.  Especially Min... He is being groomed and abused, and Lee with his traumatic past sees pain as a stimulant to forget about his pain. MC needs to start being more clear and open up completely before they both shut down.

My man is the biggest f**g bird, holy h*l. Son how are u blushing when this man is treatin you like a breathing pocketpussy?? He don't f**g respect you, and he don't know when to give you space. AND ALSO HOW IN THE WORLD ARE YOU STRUGGLING TO WRITE A SONG??? YOU HAVE SO MUCH ANGST GOING ON, IT SHOULD BE FLOWING.

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Three Nights - Ch. 34
2 months ago(edited)

I really don't know how this is gonna end up. Clearly, my man is developing feelings for all three, but how he'll reciprocate all of their feelings is BEYOND me. Especially when Donghyeo is a f(cking basta^d, and they don't f*k with each other like that.GIF

 

 

Talkin bout some doing what feels best for Hangeyeol as he didn't force all this s*t on him in the first place.  Right buddy.

Yeah, if I were gonna pay for that type of advice, I might as well have stayed home and googled my answer. Go f9ck, seriously?? He's tryna write love songs, not some washed-up songs that describe anal foreplay.

And why in the ever-loving WORLD did you ever think it was good to start f**g with your ex's new man, fully knowing this mf knows you??? Like, b*tch, you're in for a world of pain.