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The few moments that could have been interesting are completely drowned in an endless void. If there’s one positive thing to say, it’s that since the story barely says anything, you can fly through the chapters pretty quickly at least it saves time.
And that ending… wow. Better not even get into it, or I might start insulting author's grandmother. Honestly, I think every site hosting this manhwa should come with a clear warning: “NOT WORTH READING.”
The only reason this shi*** manhwa even has readers is because of something I call the Void Syndrome. You read a chapter, nothing happens. So you wait for the next one, hoping something will finally happen, but nothing. Then you wait for the next next chapter, thinking okay, surely this time something will happen...still nothing. Then you start hoping the author is just trolling us, that maybe the next one will finally deliver...something happens for like two seconds… and then, back to nothing. And the cycle repeats.
In conclusion, I would like to file a complaint for psychological manipulation, please

I was expecting cr**. I got massive cr**… I’m impressed.

The father just said and tested it in the previous chapter that threatening him...
Vinchen, 2025
Guys, I've been lost for a few chapters, I think I'm going crazy. Maybe I'm mentally retarded, or maybe the author is a genius and I'm not smart enough to understand his genius. But what the he** is the connection between being able to interrogate Carmen and getting Vinchen out of prison? His mother just has to use her power over Vinchen to publicly exonerate him. As for Abel, they can just threaten Carmen with banishing him from the family if he doesn't give up the antidote or the type of poison he used, and since he's not stupid (normally), he'll collaborate since his fuc**** goal in doing all this is to succeed his father, and again, there's a problem: how can he hope to succeed his father when EVERYONE KNOWS HE'S EVIL AND WE HAVE THE PROOF???? This shi*** plot just makes no sense.

The fact that Miss Lie Detector is removed from the story is wild. Find an excuse at least I don't know, the family doesn't trust her mother because she can be subjective with Vinchen because according to sources she is close to him? Even if you tell me that she is sick and can no longer use her powers temporarily as if by chance. I will be more satisfied than if you remove a character from the plot to establish your desired scenario more easily


Mother : "Did you do it ?"
Vinchen : "No !"
mother uses her power
Mother : "I believe you"
Vinchen : "It's Carmen !"
mother uses her power
Mother : "OMG ! CARMEN YOU ARE BANISHED FROM THE FAMILY"
Carmen : "THIS IS CHEATING !!! WHY DOES MY MOTHER HAVE TO BE A LIE DETECTOR !? LET GO OF ME ! PLEASE, NOOOOOOOOOO !!! I AM THE MASTERMIND OF THE STORY !!!!
Now next arc please
"Mmmmmh there's no poison, right? Fu** it, a beautiful elf coming out of nowhere and serving me tea is not suspicious at all, let's try it!"



