'VLAD defender of children' sounds so noble and beautiful. I respect the author for using such pure words.

Hate it

Now that's why I call confidence

Repeat work

Brooooo 😒 this is not the right chapter

Oh author , what can i say; the pure depiction of love u have shown!!!!! here i believe what a tremendous work you have done. May u get a beautiful love life.

Make the chapters more smalllll. Give only one image. Okkk only then you will satisfy

A beauty she is

After averyu long time I really leen such innocent story line. Huge respect to the author as well as the artist for making this.

Thats why I don't like manhua they always shows men as main character even when the whole story is about female lead. They have some kind of fettish

always make me blush

I specially like this chapter

I specially like this chapter

This piece reads like the writer started with no plan and finished with no purpose. The plot is not just confused—it’s a patchwork of borrowed tropes and mismatched ideas, desperately stitched together in the hope that chaos might pass for complexity. It's painfully clear the writer has mistaken imagination for skill, and enthusiasm for competence. Whatever ambition existed here has collapsed under the weight of poor execution, weak structure, and an utter lack of understanding of the genre. If this is their idea of serious writing, they are profoundly unready for it.

While the storyline demonstrates ambition, the writer appears to have lost sight of their core narrative. In an attempt to compensate for the lack of thematic depth, disparate plot elements are forcibly stitched together, resulting in a disjointed and incoherent structure. Despite possessing a vivid imagination, the writer exhibits a fundamental lack of narrative discipline and genre maturity, suggesting they are not yet equipped to handle complex storytelling within this domain.

The story tries to be complex, but the writer seems to have forgotten the main plot. Instead of building a strong narrative, they’ve mixed unrelated storylines to cover up the lack of depth. While the writer clearly has a good imagination, they don’t yet have the skill or maturity to handle this genre effectively.

The writer seems completely unaware of what story they’re trying to tell. In place of coherence or depth, they’ve thrown together mismatched plots that only highlight their confusion. This isn't creative complexity—it's narrative chaos. Despite flashes of imagination, the execution is so immature it suggests the writer is not ready—nor equipped—to write in this genre at all.