Damien Flores

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All you need to do to understand this, is ask chat GPT the relationship timeline for this story. This writer is wacko.

The 'real' story is the first 30 chapters, the next 45 is just emotional CBT.

If you like being happy, don't read this friends.

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Warrior
5 months ago
@Book Brother, you're reading a story about flying Chinese people with magic mumbo jumbo. Why is the mumbo jumbo panther what bothers you?
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For what reason...

Imagine being in this moment and still boiling over the fact that he's stronger than you and "Boo hoo, he's so strong he doesn't have to listen to me!".

 

Jealousy is a terrible shade on anyone. The MC just saved your lives, the very same people who have been maulding at EVERY INCH of this story lmfao.

My guess is that she's working with the flame country dude, and that guy is his biological dad, and she is like a 'maid' that watches over him. She gets a little too jealous when she sees him near other girls, and that whole last bit is NOT something you'd expect from a blood sister, but rather a girl from one of those Korean stories. 🤣

Dang, I'm a little confused however with some of the pacing and direction. I like the story, but here's some weird inconsistencies:

1. She was like a badass in the 'apocolypse' world she was from and clearly has hunter abilities, but why is she afraid of random things like flying and snakes?

2. She's got a gun, which we find out is useless, but maybe I need more context from the world she came from, and it's kinda worthless here.

3. She had a degree in botany, but she's tanning leather, sewing, trapmaking, earth growing magic (that one makes sense), and clearly some agent-level skills

4. (The most important) I feel like we need to be given a little more information from the world she came from at the very least. Her background reminds me of a dream you keep waking in and out of, I just need some context for the level in which her world was, considering she has an inventory and magic.

 

I look forward to more updates, hopefully this is one of those stories that randomly gets double digit chapter dumps.

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