
Lilith
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lil bro needs to keep quiet


i wish isekai manhwas had the mc have a happy/normal life before they get isekaid. When they wake up in a new body, they hyperventilate and such. It'd take up like 3-5 chapters until they recover and get used to everything, but i think it'd add a lot of character depth...
just me? 

Just because one thing happens doesn''t justify it. That's like saying "Everyone pretty much uses slurs, so let's say them too!" Sure there may be a lot of "adult" stories that use ra**, but normalization doesn't make it right.
And as a writer, I believe that I have plenty of imagination regarding DIFFERENT routes in which the MC could have taken when abused in a world where strong pray in the weak. There's essentially a whole genre dedicated to similar situations...
But then again...you can like what you like.
1. (SPOILERS HERE). In order to activate the skill, he has to be killed...and even then he's not guarenteed the skill, especially if they have multiple good ones. Then he has to convince people to kill him. And hunters are celebrities. The only reason why he met that grandpa and the fire king is because one is a lone wolf and the other beats people up. Not worth the effort.
2. It's easy for you to say this when you're reading from an omniscient perspective. It may seem obvious to us, who are levelheaded and can see everything on the playing field, but the MC isn't omniscient. This can be applied to simple things such as games and sports. But I won't get into that for the sake of the length of the review.
3. Hello? Not detailed? Now I know you're talking about the origins of the powers and such; but I believe that the current plot has such an immense amount of story building that it makes up for it. And...why are you (pardon my language) bitc****? I would love to see you come up with a story with as much depth as this. Though the plot may be cliche with the sudden "blessed with op power," the depth of MC's masters world, lord of rain and whatever's world, and his wife's world are breathtaking. As a writer and reader; your concerns are quite minimal and unreasonable...especially for granting it a 3/5.
what that tongue do tho 🤔
Not even joking. bro that tongue would go so far up my pus-
laggy af, but has good translation



Her main weapon should really be a chair
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if ykyk.

i mean what