Lizzy's comments

im sorry i mesnt to say trash ending, not trash story

I totally agree with you. I hope the side stories make the characters emotions more clear and the problems between them get solved more in detail and not just over the surface. But thank you for reminding me that the story might take a good turn thanks to the side stories that are yet to come :)

it says the end in the title. The main story is finished, the :to be continued" likely refers to the side stories that are yet to come. I wont deny that the story can take a good turn but for the main story it was just too rushed in my opinion. To me its a trash story for now and i wont change atm bc the emptions the author was zrying to bring over to the aufience were expressed and written poorly. Again this is my opinion.

I see your point and I'm sure the author meant to weite something like that, yet the way it was written didn't make it very clear and i feel like it coulve been more detailed. We saw how they had this misunderstanding but it got "solved" without the real issue being taken care of. Also i didn't say his dreams wasnt relevent but it wasn't the main part of the story nor talked about enough for it to be the last quote. And i totally understand that if i disliked the story i could just skip and not read it but as i meantioned i really loved this story, which is the reason the end disappointed me. Thanks for sharing your POV though :)

Probably bc side stories are following but if this is the end of the main story it stoll disappoints (my opinion)

Why is everyone glazing this? I totally loved it and was obsessed with every chapter from the beginning but this ending totally disappointed me. The ending, actually no, the whole story is so rushed... Let's be more critical, even with things we like please. This ending is straight up trash especially when we know that this author has the audience to finance a longer story. This was really uncreative, it feels like a side story with bunch of side quests sneaked in to the main plot, except it doesnt even have one. First you'd think it's about their relationship, then it takes them 2 chapters so get together, no hardships, nothing. And then they end it with the quote "He did was he loved doing the most" when the story wasn't even mainly about him becoming a superstar. Yes it was an important thing to him but it was always secondary to the story, so why does the end make it look like it's the main message of the whole thing?? It feel like being fed a gorgeous plate but the whole meal was play dough...