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The_Illusionist
1 month ago

@The_Illusionist These last few chapters are about the time BEFORE the exhibition (aka before she meets Noah and the kids). It explains how the time spent with Julian changed her, and her feelings

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From her thoughts in this chapter, it's clear she'll go back to her Ex if he grovels even a little. ...
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Alex
1 month ago

@Alex If you have been paying attention, these last few chapters are about the time BEFORE the exhibition (aka before she meets Noah and the kids). It explains how she ended giving J a chance.

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I have a feeling that shes stringing Julian along, doing to him something similar to how Noah tre...

Guys, relax a little. These last few chapters are a throwback to the time after she gave birth, leading up to the exhibition where she meets Noah and the kids. It’s a fast-forward skip in time, but it also explains how the time they spent together made her give J a chance. It explains how she ended up choosing Julian (remember the abrupt scene where these two were having fun in bed? Well... now it explains how she ended up under Julian.) 

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Rio
2 months ago

@Rio

Spoiler!
He's fine. You'll hate the mom

 

 

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@sAssBee omfg i need some reassurance. Is the ml serious with th mc rn or is this some ...

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waggytail
3 months ago

@waggytail it's not actually off limits. more a messed up situation. It's more than obvious that the dude doesn't want our baby to see who the caller is... cus this will trigger pain and misunderstandings. Let's say their beginning isn't what he makes it look like to be

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@sAssBee who was it im lowk confused on why the phone is off limits 

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Many people judge her for leaving Winter and Kai, and they also say she has no heart. For real? She gave birth to them but she wasn't allowed to consider herself their mother. The kids weren't allowed to call her mother... and even if they were big enough... none of them questioned why. When Winter was ill, she was kept away, ignoring that she came out of her womb. No one bothered to explain anything to her, and they acted as if she had to accept everything they decide with an open heart... just because.
Surrogacy or not, she gave birth to them and had the right to minimum respect. They all acted as if she had to be available 24/7 for their benefit and ignored her feelings. And now they all suffer and judge her? That's cheap.
Yes, she accepted his terms when she signed the contract, but I don't remember there being a clause where the others were allowed to step on her feelings and treat her like she's less than a shadow. Call me whatever you want, but if your kid doesn't see you as his mother, why force that on him? In their eyes she was a nanny... nothing more. Why should a nanny stay trapped all her life in kids' lives?
And not to forget, she never stood a chance in front of them. His first love was everything that mattered... she was just there to take care of her kids, without any claims. When all you hear from the man you love is that he has only his first in his heart and nothing else matters... would you consider that he'll love yours too when he did everything possible just to be sure he'll never have one with you? Yeah, sorry, but you can't blame her for having enough and leaving.
If your partner acted like that with you, would you consider giving him a chance to be a father? Be honest with yourself.
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Lucy
6 months ago
@Lucy Tristan and Ethan are my top 3 couples. Can't not to love em
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@sAssBee   yeesss yeess yess that's the name ... My mind was thinking ' water something 🫪...
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Lucy
6 months ago
@Lucy Thirst poco sticker
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@sAssBee   brooo what's the name of your pfp ... Coz Ik I've already read this ..  but I c...
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Lucy
6 months ago
@Lucy Yes, he's the one 😏
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Dane is that Cat Guy from " love me if you can " right ???...
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Nickname
8 months ago
@Nickname Well, it's not just that. Initial disinterest led to a domino effect of flaws (if we want to identify them; nonetheless, we are not aiming to undermine the author but to evaluate their work). There could be many reasons why they put this story aside, and we can't judge the person—maybe they were sick, had a family member die, or something tragic happened around them. Otherwise, it would have done something to make our diva MC stronger or tried to punish everyone who did wrong to him (or at least I hope 😅).
Their pairing can be compatible with communication—a lot of communication (if we want to keep "the rule of endings"—yet, a separation would have been worse for MC since he already sees himself at the lowest point; another abandonment would have killed him for good). Even if words alone can't fix everything, I have no doubt that ML—big jackass that he is—could have helped MC. In my opinion, the only thing that could have pulled MC out of his dark past was therapy in conjunction with ML's support, given his level of depression. The story would have been half saved, at least, if this had been the last part.
This "ending" is rushed and leaves a lot of things hanging. Still, I appreciate that the author gave MC a happy ending, in their own way.
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I don't think it's lack of interest, it's the realization they made an absolu...

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Voooo
8 months ago
@Voooo When we come across this kind of story, we all have 'fat fingers' syndrome, lol, no worries. Now that you mentioned it, I forgot about so many parts since all I could remember was his constant crying. He was such a diva. 🙄 We can easily say that NOTHING was solved. 😒 The author seems to have lost interest and just wanted to finish it (to say it nicely 😅).
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@sAssBee deadass so many things left unsaid like wtf happen3d to him being engaged and ge...
I usually hate giving bad feedback since I know it's not easy to create a story, but boy... This story possessed immense potential, yet it squandered it in the most inelegant manner. As an avid reader and a writer myself, I appreciate stories that defy the clichés. This one could have been one of the best with some fine touches. It's evident that the author lost their way at some point, lacked the ability to refine it, and merely incorporated whatever came to mind. However, I admire their courage in completing it, given the prevalence of stories that end midway. I am not sure which is worse: abandoning a story with a good start or forcing it into a bad one. 😊😂
Anyway, thanks for giving us a good (?) ending. It could have been way worse, folks. 😅