kiwi paunch

kiwi paunch

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Pd2507
3 weeks ago

@Pd2507 OH MY GOD THANK YOU FOR TELLING ME LOVE YOU 

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His brother has his own manhwa called Rabbit hole , they’re not less than them , real sibling’s c...

i feel like i don’t really know the characters or any of their like motivations and things are just suddenly happening. maybe it’s just sauce lost in the translation but the writing isn’t as good as it could be yknow? like i need more life to the world. 

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KAT
2 months ago

@KAT  YES THATS WHAT I WAS TRYING TO SAY! I love the concept and art so much but there’s like nothing at stake here no other characters mostly etc. and like you said the chapters are so short it really does feel like they’re like bonus chapters not the main story and it’s really just kinda sucky cause there’s so much potential 

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@kiwi paunch i honestly agree…. The whole story feels a bit more flat from the first sea...

Hot take but I feel like there isn’t a lot of depth to the characters or the world. Like I know they’re pretty but I don’t really know anything about them besides the barebones. How do vampires live in society, where does he get his blood, do other people know, etc. maybe it’s just me idk 

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Recoil - Ch. 2

Jesus Christ what is up with bl manhwas just having r*e scenes in the first few chapters.

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mello
4 months ago
@mello you do realize this story came out well before ai was really a thing
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this sh** a chai script bro...