The mangaka, yes, I finally learned the word to describe the author of a manwha, is once again showing me how they cannot physically nor mentally be compatible to write a good plot for a story. I have many words to exchange about this sorry thing the mangaka dares to even call a chapter. First, why did the mangaka think it was okay to add unnecessary sa into this bl? It was worse as is but the sa makes it even more unappealing, like did the already poor character design not encourage you to make a better plot? Also, I think they have memory loss aswell because why was the MC working at a convenience store in the first chapter but is now working as a warehouse worker? It seems as if the mangaka is somehow forgetting things that were already stated not even two chapters ago! And why is MC always talking about how "these are the golden years of my life if I don't party now, then when will I ever get the chance again?" I don't know, maybe ALWAYS, this stupid twink is acting as if his already disappointing and insignificant life is going to end if he doesn't party, just do it when you're out of college! Anywho, as I previously stated, I will continue to add my commentary on every chapter. I hope the mangaka finally grows their frontal lobe and gets to writing an actual good plot that isn't this slop.
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This is genuinely so a**, but I'm bored, so I must persist reading, although I do feel entitled to be able to leave some comments. How in the world does everyone in the MC's guild somehow live near him, at that point there was no reason to make this manhwa about a digital guild if they were so close to each other. Also, why is everyones ingame design almost the exact same as their in-person design? It feels as if the artist who worked on this manhwa just gave up midway with the design making. There are also too many things that aren't logical in this manhwa. The MC drank three bottles of straight soju and isn't knocked out, nor is he bloated, and to make matters even worse he even has ABS, wtf?? This comment is getting a little too long, so I will continue to add my commentary on the next chapter.
This manhwa is like if someone took My Guild Mate Next Door, swapped the roles, made the MC a broke college student, gave him a broken childhood, and also decided to make the writing ten times worse. Whoever greenlit this should be ashamed of themselves.


no.. aftercare? 

i just creamed


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