GachaMachi
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Bro, the main character characters Is so terribly written. How are you gonna get mad at Sally for not talking about something unpleasant when you literally reacted terribly to the unpleasant news. Like she literally acted like a kid When Sally retracted her statements, even though she was appalled that Sally was saying stuff like that. And her moods keep switching on and off. Also, she's not even doing anything. She never found the diary and all she's doing to lose weight is to starve herself, not that she even needs to lose weight.Also the pacing in the story is really bad. And she's low-key kind of dumb because how does she not realize that her husband loves her? Her evidence that he hates her it's really just evidence that he loves her. I'm dropping this sh** cause she's making this real hard to read
Fuc**** ass**** ...
leave tha...






