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Seriously chapter 81 isn't the right chapter its an esrlier chapter. Fix it asap. Do your job properly. You are better than this.

Chapter 81 isn't thebright chapter you spliced in the WRONG chapter.

That girl in the ruined world the apocalypse world needs to be fed propeerly not nust fing scraps but actially real food and lots of it not just a pudding cup a fruit cup and half a bottlenof water especially for all the core fetching she does. Step up and do it right. Help the girl in the ruined world no more not feeding her properly.

🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕Another pathetic braindead story writtenxby someone seriously mentally ill. Another pathetic spineless r*d that just goes along with what others say. And then ends up in a harem with the ringoieces that threatened him and his peaceful life. If it was hajime nagumo he'd tell thebstupid b*h off and if shebtries anyrhing or threns him its over for her. But of course the mc has to be a retarded apineless sackless wad just doing what others tell them. Its retarded and retarded storytelling and writing . The braindead mindless r*d that wrote this s*t needs theirbhead examjned and to stay far far far far away from ANY writing utensil. YOU PIECE OF S*T YOU HAVE NO BUSINESS EVER WRITING BECAUSE YOY HAVE DEMONSTRATED YOU CANNOT WRITE SMARTLY OR INTELLULIGENTLY. ALL YOU CAN DO IS FINGER PAINT YOUR RETARDEDNESS ALL OVER THE PAPER. DO THEBWORLD A FAVOR AND EITHER GIVE UP WRITING OR GROW AND BECOME A MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER STORYTELLER AND WRITER. YOU CANT WRITE TO SAVE YOUR LIFE MUCH LESS  A WET BROWN PAPER. GROWNOR GIVE UP ITS THAT SIMPLE. SHIT OR GET OFF THE POT. WE READ TO RELAX NOT BE BOTHERED BY BRAINDEAD GOOFY RETARDED WRITING. WRITE SMART OR FUCK OFF FOREVER. TAKE SOME PRIDE IN A JOB WELL DOWN THIS AINT A JOB WELL DONE. YOU SHIT THE BED YOU FUCKED UP ROYALLY.TAKE ENOUGH PRIDE IN A JOB WELL DONE TO ACTUALLY EO A JOB WELL DONE WHICH YOU HAVEN'T. GET SOME HELP OR FUCK OFF. RETARDED WRITIN GJUST BRINGS DOWN THE QUALITY OF WRITING. YOU ARE DRAGGING EVERYONE DOWN WITH BRAINDEAD WRITING. YOU ARE LOWERING THE FUCKING BAR SO DO IT RIGHT OR FUCK OFF.🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕YOU WRITE SOMETHING AND ALL YOU CAN WRITE IS BRAINDEAD BRAIN DAMADGED SHIT. GOOD JOB ON SHITTING THE BED YA RUSTY SHITEATING SLOBBERING WAD OF HUMAN FECES. WITHER GROW AMD WRITE SMART OR FUCK OFF. ITS THAT SIMPLE. NOW FUCK OFF TO WHERE WE MEVER HAVE TO DEAL WITH YOU EVER AGAIN. 

Get help prossional and divine. You ain't okay thisbis sick beyond sick its depraved beyond depraved. You deserve to be a plaything for demons in h*l. To get passed arohnd from demon to demon but you're soooooo sick depraved demented and psychotic that you'd prolly like that and ask for more. No one nees this no one ever will. Howbthe fu*k could this ever help anyone sleep better or make more noney or be happier. Keep your goofy  depraved demented psycho shi*t to yourself. You need serious help. This ain't okay. Go drink and eat the chemicals under the sink . You could have made any kind of story or a mix of many but noooooooooooo you chose sickness depravity and eating mars bars upside down to feel the viens  on your tongue. No one needs to know you like getting bent. That you love getting bummed and bumming others. Keep your sick goof shi*t to yourself. You NEED help serious serious help. You never had to needed to put this evil sickness online. Keep your depravity to yourself. Get help you fuc*ing need it.🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕i hope and wish a meteor would kill you and everyone like you. Theres waaaaaaaaaaaaaay to many sick depraved sacks of filthy diseased smegma. Get help professional and divine. You ain't okay. Stop telling the world you like getting bent why the fuc* does anyone need to know-no one fuc*ing does. Duh! Fuc*ing duh dumb*ss. You liking getting bent isn't our business sooooooo keep it that fuc*ing way and atop telling the world because you need attention because your didn't get enough love and attention. The world's full of people that are also missing that and there not psycho's criminals depraved vile demented animals that are too sick to live. NO ONE NEEDS THIS SICKNESS EVER NOT HUNDREDS OF THOUSANDS OF YEARS AGO. NOT IN CAVEMAN TIMES. NEVER EVER.YOU ARE A SICKO GET SOME FUC*ING PROFESSIONAL AND DIVINE HELP. YOU AIN'T OKAY. AND NOTHING ABOUT THIS IS. FUC*OFF DON'T EVER COME BACK UNTILL YOU CAN BE SANE NOT A SICK DEPRQVED DEMENTED DISEASED ANIMAL. KEEP YOU FUC*ING VILENESS TO YOUR FUC*ING SELF. NO ONE ASKED FOR THIS.EAT SHI*T CHOKE ON IT AND BEGONE AND TAKE YOUR DEPRAVITY WITH YOU. YA FUC*ING SICK VILE DEPRAVED DEMENTED DISEASED CREATURE. NOT ASKED FOR. NOT FUC*ING NEEDED.🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕

🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕. No one meeds this sick depraved vile evil clnasty s*t. Pack it the f*k in. Stop your sick depravity. Stop. Just f**g stop. Stop the demented sickness. Don't EVER try writing anything ever again. Sparw the world and the future your depraved demenred evil sickness. You like this sickness keep it to yourself.  KEEP YOUR SICK DEPRAVED DEMENTED BRAINDEAD EVIL IREDEEEMABLE SICKNESS TO YOURSELF.  This was MEVER asked for wanted or needed.  Get intimate with  a nuclear rod and save humanity from yourself. Ju.p into the lion enclosure at a zoo wearing cuts of meat pi ned to your clothes. 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕

You are a ringpiece for putting empty speach bubbkes at all but especially in the first chapter. Dont yiu have even a shred of pride for a job well done. Because you're falling at your job. How dare you leave 1 speach bubble empty. You're not doing your job. STOP. PUTTING.EMPTY.SPEECH.BUBBLES. take a shred of pride in a job well done if you've done a good job which you havent. If i was your boss id fire you. You would be jobless sooooo fast. Do your job right or whats the point in doing a job or having a job. DO.IT.FING.RIGHT or whats the point in paying you for a crappy job. Do you fing job or quit. We dont need idiots like you.

It coupd have been an interesting idea but killing the old man and pushing the granddautlghter into revenge. Thats wrong. Thats evil. This is bad writing. Terrible writing. Straight trash story. Was an intersting concept could have been good but you not jist terrible at writing you are atrocious at it. Untill you up your writing game you should stay 100 ft from any writing device for the sake of all writing. You are giving writing a bad name. Do better or stop writing.

Atop lying to yourself your not an author. Stop putting evil out online. Keep your sick sick sh*t to yourself.

If you likenthis evil sick demented sh*t then thers something wrong with you

You are out of your mind to put this out online. The world never needed this and will never need this. Its cover toccover evil. All you've created is evil. Everything you touch turns to sh*t. You seriously need your head examined for thinking this is okay just because its fiction. That is an invalid defense. Its like saying everyone cheats so why cant i. That doent make it okay or justify it. You are sick becauee what you created is sick demented depraved disgusting disturbing vile evil disease infested filth that helps no one. Pick a different stoey make your own stoey that isnt evil. You aint doing G.o.d's work. You are doing evil you are putting out evil. Reguardless of how you have to pay for this in the afterlife. YOU GET WHAT YOU GIVE YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW AND YOU ARE SOWING EVIL. SO ITS GOING TO COME BACK AROUND ON YOU. It doesnt matter if you dont believe in karma we ALL have it we all earn it. STOP PUTTING OUT THIS SICK EVIL VILE FILTH. THERS OTHE RSTOIES YOU CAN MAKE OR WHATEVER THERES SOEMTHING YOU CAN DO THAT ISNT THIS. YOU KEEP CHOOSING EVIL AND YOU ARE GOI G TO GET IT BACK IN THIS LIFE AND WHATEVER COMES AFTER.

IF YOU DONT WANT TO BE A PLAYTHIG FOR DEMONS , IF YOU DONT WANT TO GET PASSED AROUND BY DEMONS, IF YOU DONT WANT TO GIVE BRAIN TO DEMONS YOU ARE MAKING THE WRONG DICISION AND WRONG CHOICE. STOP CHOOSING EVIL STOP BEING EVIL. GET HELP. BOTH PROFESSIONAL AND DIVINE. YOU NEED G.O.D AND J.E.S.U.S YOU AINT RIGHT IN THE HEAD. STOP PUTTING OUT THIS EVIL OR DO UOU WAN TTO BE A PLAYTHIG FOR DEMONS. YOU NEED SERIOUS HELP THIS AINT RIGHT AND NEVER SHOULD BE.

Theres something wrong with the person who created this everyone along the way who approved and allowed this and eveyone who yhinks this is a good story. Just by being a stupid braindead dumb story it has lost any value it had as a story and is terrible writing because the premise is disgusting vile demented evil sick depraved.this isnt okay this isnt right this isnt good. You are making serious negative karma for yourself you might want to think about never making anymore of this sick depraved demented evil. You camt seriouslt believe your helping the world helping people to grow. If you think your helping anyone jy putting this outbinto the world you should be locked up forever in a faciliry where you cant reach anyone where you have no internet.
You aint foing the Lord's work. You're NOT. not one bit of this is okay. You NEED serious help. Professional and divine. YOU ARE NOT OKAY IN THE HEAD SPIRIT HEART MIND OR ANYWHERE ELSE. Im not tryjng to be mean or belittle you. But seriously yiu cant think this is okay just because its fiction.
I real life humans and neaderthals were at war. They raided our villages killed the men and used them for food and the woemn for breeding material. Thats real history that teally happened and its NOT OKAY just because it happened in history. Villages were burned in history people were murdered and put i to slavery. Its like defemding cheating or killing because EVERYONE DOES IT ITS COMMON. Thats no defemse either. Just becasue it happened in history or everyone does it is NO DEFENSE. THAT FOESNT JUSTIDY IT BECAUS ETHERE IS NO JUSTIFYING IT. You are sick you need help. Stop putting this out and mayne just maybe you'll avoid being a playthi g for demons in the underworld. Because again this aint the work of the Lord. Its evil you are doing evil. Amd you get what you give so font be surprised when your evil comes back on you in whatever form it takes whenever it does because it will and mayne it will be jothing more than the Lord daying i kniw ye kmnot. Depart from me. You are sick. This is sickness and it NEEDS TO BE STOPPED. NO ONE NEEDS THIS YOU AR EHRLPKNG NO ONE BUT YOURSELF AT THE EXPENSE OF EVWRYONE INCLUDING YOURSELF. you wanma be a plaything of demons you go ahead but stop tryingto bring everyone else down with you. Sto being misery loves company. Stop acting like someone who has a fatal disease and just wa ts infect everyone they can so ghey dont have to fie alone. You NEED SERIOUS SERIOUS HELP BOTH PROFESSIONAL AMD DIVINE. You are not okay and you wont be okay existentially. You are s**g yourself into the underworld and thats your choice but stop tryi gto bring everyone along. We dont want your evil because we dont want evil. So keep your evil to yourself. Yo udidnt have to put this online. You could have kept it to yourself. So you ARE GOING TO PAY FOR THAT in sow way soem how and its probably your afterlife. MAKE NO MISTAKE YOU F'D UP. YOU SH*T THE BED WHEN IT MATTERED MOST. KEEP YOU EVIL TO YOURSELF. WE DO T WANT IT WE DO T NEED IT. YOU AINT HELPING ANYONE. STOP BRING HUMANITY DOWN STOP SELLING US OUT JUST TO LINE YOUR POCKETS. BO NE WANTS THIS NO ONE NEEDS IT. PACK IT IN. YOU CAN WRITE ANYTHINGIT DOESNT HAVE TO BE SICK DEMENTED DEPRAVED DISGUSTING BEAINDEAD GARBAGE. WHAT THE F IS WRONG WITH YOU THAT YOU THINK THIS IS OKAY. YOU ARW GOING TO BE A PLAYTHING FOR DEMONS. STOP NOW WHE. MAYNE THERS A CHANCE YOU CAN AVOID THAT POSSIBLY MAYBE. BUT NO YOU MIST REALLY WANT TO BE A PLAYTHING FOR DEMONS. KEEP YOUR EVIL TO YOURSELF. NO ONE NEEDS IT NO ONE WANTS IT.
You could literally write ANY story but you chose evil dont be surprised when you get it back.yoi get what you give. What goes around comes around. You reap what you sow. So stop sowing evil. U less yiu want to be aplaythi gfor demons. Get help 🙏 both professional and divine. You NEED IT. This isnt okay its not. You sh*t the bed for real. Get prilofessionsl and divine help. You need it.