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It coupd have been an interesting idea but killing the old man and pushing the granddautlghter into revenge. Thats wrong. Thats evil. This is bad writing. Terrible writing. Straight trash story. Was an intersting concept could have been good but you not jist terrible at writing you are atrocious at it. Untill you up your writing game you should stay 100 ft from any writing device for the sake of all writing. You are giving writing a bad name. Do better or stop writing. 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

You are out of your mind to put this out online. The world never needed this and will never need this. Its cover toccover evil. All you've created is evil. Everything you touch turns to sh*t. You seriously need your head examined for thinking this is okay just because its fiction. That is an invalid defense. Its like saying everyone cheats so why cant i. That doent make it okay or justify it. You are sick becauee what you created is sick demented depraved disgusting disturbing vile evil disease infested filth that helps no one. Pick a different stoey make your own stoey that isnt evil. You aint doing G.o.d's work. You are doing evil you are putting out evil. Reguardless of how you have to pay for this in the afterlife. YOU GET WHAT YOU GIVE YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW AND YOU ARE SOWING EVIL. SO ITS GOING TO COME BACK AROUND ON YOU. It doesnt matter if you dont believe in karma we ALL have it we all earn it. STOP PUTTING OUT THIS SICK EVIL VILE FILTH. THERS OTHE RSTOIES YOU CAN MAKE OR WHATEVER THERES SOEMTHING YOU CAN DO THAT ISNT THIS. YOU KEEP CHOOSING EVIL AND YOU ARE GOI G TO GET IT BACK IN THIS LIFE AND WHATEVER COMES AFTER.

IF YOU DONT WANT TO BE A PLAYTHIG FOR DEMONS , IF YOU DONT WANT TO GET PASSED AROUND BY DEMONS, IF YOU DONT WANT TO GIVE BRAIN TO DEMONS YOU ARE MAKING THE WRONG DICISION AND WRONG CHOICE. STOP CHOOSING EVIL STOP BEING EVIL. GET HELP. BOTH PROFESSIONAL AND DIVINE. YOU NEED G.O.D AND J.E.S.U.S YOU AINT RIGHT IN THE HEAD. STOP PUTTING OUT THIS EVIL OR DO UOU WAN TTO BE A PLAYTHIG FOR DEMONS. YOU NEED SERIOUS HELP THIS AINT RIGHT AND NEVER SHOULD BE.

Theres something wrong with the person who created this everyone along the way who approved and allowed this and eveyone who yhinks this is a good story. Just by being a stupid braindead dumb story it has lost any value it had as a story and is terrible writing because the premise is disgusting vile demented evil sick depraved.this isnt okay this isnt right this isnt good. You are making serious negative karma for yourself you might want to think about never making anymore of this sick depraved demented evil. You camt seriouslt believe your helping the world helping people to grow. If you think your helping anyone jy putting this outbinto the world you should be locked up forever in a faciliry where you cant reach anyone where you have no internet.
You aint foing the Lord's work. You're NOT. not one bit of this is okay. You NEED serious help. Professional and divine. YOU ARE NOT OKAY IN THE HEAD SPIRIT HEART MIND OR ANYWHERE ELSE. Im not tryjng to be mean or belittle you. But seriously yiu cant think this is okay just because its fiction.
I real life humans and neaderthals were at war. They raided our villages killed the men and used them for food and the woemn for breeding material. Thats real history that teally happened and its NOT OKAY just because it happened in history. Villages were burned in history people were murdered and put i to slavery. Its like defemding cheating or killing because EVERYONE DOES IT ITS COMMON. Thats no defemse either. Just becasue it happened in history or everyone does it is NO DEFENSE. THAT FOESNT JUSTIDY IT BECAUS ETHERE IS NO JUSTIFYING IT. You are sick you need help. Stop putting this out and mayne just maybe you'll avoid being a playthi g for demons in the underworld. Because again this aint the work of the Lord. Its evil you are doing evil. Amd you get what you give so font be surprised when your evil comes back on you in whatever form it takes whenever it does because it will and mayne it will be jothing more than the Lord daying i kniw ye kmnot. Depart from me. You are sick. This is sickness and it NEEDS TO BE STOPPED. NO ONE NEEDS THIS YOU AR EHRLPKNG NO ONE BUT YOURSELF AT THE EXPENSE OF EVWRYONE INCLUDING YOURSELF. you wanma be a plaything of demons you go ahead but stop tryingto bring everyone else down with you. Sto being misery loves company. Stop acting like someone who has a fatal disease and just wa ts infect everyone they can so ghey dont have to fie alone. You NEED SERIOUS SERIOUS HELP BOTH PROFESSIONAL AMD DIVINE. You are not okay and you wont be okay existentially. You are s**g yourself into the underworld and thats your choice but stop tryi gto bring everyone along. We dont want your evil because we dont want evil. So keep your evil to yourself. Yo udidnt have to put this online. You could have kept it to yourself. So you ARE GOING TO PAY FOR THAT in sow way soem how and its probably your afterlife. MAKE NO MISTAKE YOU F'D UP. YOU SH*T THE BED WHEN IT MATTERED MOST. KEEP YOU EVIL TO YOURSELF. WE DO T WANT IT WE DO T NEED IT. YOU AINT HELPING ANYONE. STOP BRING HUMANITY DOWN STOP SELLING US OUT JUST TO LINE YOUR POCKETS. BO NE WANTS THIS NO ONE NEEDS IT. PACK IT IN. YOU CAN WRITE ANYTHINGIT DOESNT HAVE TO BE SICK DEMENTED DEPRAVED DISGUSTING BEAINDEAD GARBAGE. WHAT THE F IS WRONG WITH YOU THAT YOU THINK THIS IS OKAY. YOU ARW GOING TO BE A PLAYTHING FOR DEMONS. STOP NOW WHE. MAYNE THERS A CHANCE YOU CAN AVOID THAT POSSIBLY MAYBE. BUT NO YOU MIST REALLY WANT TO BE A PLAYTHING FOR DEMONS. KEEP YOUR EVIL TO YOURSELF. NO ONE NEEDS IT NO ONE WANTS IT.
You could literally write ANY story but you chose evil dont be surprised when you get it back.yoi get what you give. What goes around comes around. You reap what you sow. So stop sowing evil. U less yiu want to be aplaythi gfor demons. Get help 🙏 both professional and divine. You NEED IT. This isnt okay its not. You sh*t the bed for real. Get prilofessionsl and divine help. You need it.

EVERYLAST ONE OF YOU LIKING THIS EVILNESS AND INVOLVED IN PUTTING IT OUT INTO THE WORLD, YIU NEED G.O.D and J.E.S.U.S. you aint okay this aint okay. Theres NOTHING okay about this evil. Stop supporting evil. Duh duh idiot. The world is like this becaus eof idiots like you. None of you should be free you should all be locked away where you cant hurt anyone. No one needs this. No sane good person wants this. So go away. Just stop being evil or get passed around by demons.
Stop putting out this evil or get ready to be passed around by demons in the lake of fire. Its going to happen not by my hand no you existentially are earning it yourself as we all do. Your actions and choices are earning bad things for yourself. ASTOP PUTTING OUT YOUR EVIL SICK DEMENTED SICKNESS OR GET READY TO BE A PLAYTHI G FOR DEMONS FOR ALL ETERNITY. YOUR CHOICE. KEEP CHOOSING EVIL AND DONT BE SURPRISED AND THE CONSEQUENCES YOU BROUGHT ON YOURSELF. I HAVE NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS OTHER THAN TELLING YOU. THIS EVIL IS ALL YOU SO ENJOY GETTING PASSED AROUND BY DEMONS FOR ALL ETERNITY.
Evil is evil and good is good. All youve done is make vlciver to cover celbration of abuse. Were going to get excited and enjoy fictional peoples abuse and serious suffering. Every last one of you needs G.O.D and J.E.S.U.S. you are f'd in the head to think this is okay for any reason but especulially just because its fictional. You crwsted evil you are facilitating evil. You revel amd enjoy the fictional suffering and abuse you infliict on ithers. You are evil and so is what you created. Yiu should NEVER EVER be allowed near a pen paper or the internet again as all you do is put out evil.
Tmyou are reveling in and enjoying the abuse you heap on fictional characters. You are evil your crwating is evil beyond evil. Dont ever write again. Do t ever even try. You are abysmal at it. Its not sophosticated its evil 😈. Its not intriguing or cool or fun its demented full evil. You are putting out evil think about your karma. Because you are earni g negative karma and maybe thats a bad idea. Stop bei g evil stop choosing evil stop putting this evil sick shi* out there. NO ONE NEEDS IT YOUR ARENT HELPING ANYONE BUT YOURSELF YOU ARE LINING YOUR POCKETS BY GLORIFYING ABUSE. STOP BEING EVIL. STOP WORKING FOR EVIL. AND  MAYBE YOULL AVOID BRING A PLAYTHING FOR DEMONS IN THE AFTERLIFE
💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩😈👿😈👿 you and every last person invovled in this sick distrubing demented vile disgusting refuse yiu knsistnis a story is evil. Yo udidnt make a story you made cover to cover evil that NEVER should have seen the light of day. Everyone involved in producing and publishing it putting it online and every sick demented mind that thinks this shi* is okay just because its a story is sick and psychotic. You aint living in reality and you 10000000000% arent doing the lords work this is the work of evil and the devil. So you all ar wgoing to be at home in the lake of fire getting passed aroun d by demons. Yeah everylast one of you has earned being passed around by demons to give brain to demons for all eternity. You are evil the sick demented depraved evil you created without a second thought. Yiu earned it you deserve it. This sick shi* helps no one. You are juat glorifying suffering and teveling in others suffering. You enjoy the suffering misery and abuse you put fictional characters through you get off o. Ot and thats even sicker. You dont belong out in public any of you. You are poisoning the world with your sickness and you wonder why the world is messed up- YOU AINT KEEPING YOUR SICK ESS TO YOURSELF. You cluld have wrote this evil and kept it to yourself but no you chose evil. So be prepared to give brain to demons for all eternity. You aremed it its your karma. You are doing evil and you dont have to. You could have made a story about ANYTHING even mashing stories together but no you chose evil. Are you are going to have to pay your karma bill same as eveyone else and everyone who ever lived. So enjoy getting bent over by demons for all eternity you earned it.
The demons are going to pass you around like aits a concert shi*ting on you all kinds of sick thungs but you'd prolly like that. You go be a plaything for the demons the rest of us dont want this evil sick retarded demented vile evil psychotic sh*t smearyou call a story. You cant write so save your life if this is the best you can do and it abvipusly is. So quit no one needs your evil no one is better off having your sickness. So keep your sickness to yourself. And yes you are very very sick eveywjere but mostly the spirit mind heart soul all the thi gs that matter you are sick in. Seek G.O.D and J.E.S.U.S or be a plaything to demons your choice. But i wont be surprised if you continue to choose evil dont be surprise dwhen demons start passing you around. You earned it you did it its your karma so maybe stop earning it.
You are evil this story is evil. There jo teo ways about it. Your watching aome get rap*d and enjoying it licking your lips and weinging your hands getringexcited avout someone being abused. Thats evil thats psychoatic you have detached from reality and every last one of you invovled in releasing this evil snd those that enjoy it vecaue it fiction its not real. Shi* like rhis happened in real life villages were. Attacked even in caveman ti.es neanderthals killing and eating humans and taking th ewimen for breeding material it really happened but just bevsue eit ssomething thatreally happened ir soemthing fictional doenst make it okay. All you did was make a cover to cover abuse story just for the sake of enjoying someone elses misery. You are beyond f'd. I do t think professionals can help you and if the Lord can help you its because you sont want to be helped you want to stay jn your evilness. Well you can look forward to getting passed around by demons in the lake of fire for all eternity. Yeah giving brain to demons for all eternity. You cant be surprised you aint doing the Lords work. You are on the side of evil. Wnjoy getting f'd by grotesque demons for all eternity. All you had to do was not put your demented mental out into the world you and everyone like you lowers the bar and brings humanity down. This shi* lowers the bar and you wonder way the world is messed up because of people like you. Stop being evil and maybe you can avoid pleasuring demons for all eternity but you'd prolly like that. Just because you do doesnt mean others or everyone wants to. GET THE FU*K OUTTA HERE WITH YOUR EVIL. go suck a demon you waste of molecules.
PLENTY OF SLAVERY AND PEOPLE BEING FORCED I TO SEXUAL THIGS THEY DIDNT WANT. JUST BECAUSE IT HAPPENED IN HISTORY OR ITS FICTIONAL ISNT A FICTIONAL ISNT A FUC*ING DEFENSE. YOU HAVE NO DEFENSE. YOU MADE SOWMTHING SICK AND EVIL. THERES A SPECIAL PLACE IN HE** FOR PEOPLE LIKE YOU WHO DONT CARE ABOUT HUMANITY AND JUST SELL PEOPLE OUT TO AMKE MONEY BUT YOU JUST MADE A STORY WITH COVER TO COVER DEMENTED EVIL SICK DEPRAVITY. YOU ARE DEPRAVED AND SO IS THE VILE EVIL SICK DEMENTED FILTH YOU SMEARED ON THE PAGE HOLY FUC* THERES VINGTILLIONS OF ATOEIES YOU COULD COME UP WITH EVEN USING ALL KINDS OF DIFFERENT STORIES. BUT NO YOU CHOSE SEXUAL DEPRAVITY MORAL DEPRAVITY. MAKE NO MISTAKE YOU CREATED SOMETHING EVIL. AND YIU ARE GOING TO PAY FOR IT EXISTENTIALLY. YOUR OWN KARMA IS GOING TO COME FOR YOU AS IT DOES FOR ALL OF US. NOT MY NOT MY HANDS- YOUR OWN KARMA FROM YOUR OWN CHOICES AND ACTIONS. YOU CHOSE TO PUT EVIL OUT INTO THE WORLD YOU CHOSE MORAL AND SEXUAL DEPRAVITY. AND YOU WILL PAY FOR IT IN THIS LIFE AND THE NEXT. BY YOUR OWN HAMFISTED HANDS.
SO WHEN DEMONS ARE RAP*ING YOUR EYES OUT AND PASSING YOU AROUND LIKE ITS A CONCERT. KNOW THAT YOU DID THIS TO YOURSELF. ITS YOUR FAULT.
STOP PUTTING THIS EVIL SICK VILE DEMENTED DISGUSTING SHI*. IT DOESNT MATTER THST ITS FICTIONAL YOU MADE A STORY ABOUT BUILDING A KINGDOM ON RAP* AND YOU DONT THINK THATS WRONG. YOU THINK THATS THE PERCECT THING TO RELAX TO. YOU ARE EVIL YOU ARE DOING EVIL MAKE NO MISTAKE WHAT YOU MADE ISNT THE WORK OF THE LORD. ITS EVIL DEMENTED SICK VILE FILTH THE WORLD AND THE PEOPLE IN IT NEVER EVER NEEDED. YOU ARE EVIL. SO ENJOY DEMONS FU*KiNG YOUR EYEBALLS OUT IN HE**. ENJOY BEING A PLAYTHING FOR THE DEMONS AND GETTING PASSED AROUND. 

SERIOULSY IF YOU CANT UNDERSTAND THAT MAKING A STORY ABOUT BUILDING A KINGDOM ON RAP*IS EVIL THEN YOU DONT BELONG OUT IN PUBLIC. YES YOU SHOULD BE HELD IN A FACULITY AND ALL YOU EVIL SHOULD NEVER NE ALLOWED OUT. YOU DONT BELONG OUT IN PUBLIC
Something is seriously wrong with you. You have 1 job when it comes to posting manga. It's not meeting g a quota. It's not being the first to post. No not even a little your job because you chose this job is to keep the flow of the story to make and keep it flowing and moving smoothly. If I was you literally doing the same job I wouldn't and do t care about how long it take sto post it would be about making an understa dable product or service. The bottom line you aint doing your job properly. You aint working to make it understandable, to make the story flow. No you leave speech bubbles. That's not doing your job properly.  All you ha e to do is put 3 dots next to eachother  but no you can even do that. Just do your job properly. No empty speech bubbles and there nothing wrong with wanting to have a solid flowing consistently for and of stories. That's not wrong. What is wrong is when people count on you doing your job wrong. If you were in a factory would you miss manufacture various parts and depending on what was manufa ture like helicopters for example yiu could get people killed. I know it's not the same but don't you have any pride in a job well done, in doing g things right. It's real wrong to keep leaving empty speech bubbles where's your editor they should be proof reading it for mistakes. Just do your job properly. If your going g to do anything even make a sandwich you should do it right and this aint right. Con aren't you better than that.
I really dont think this is what yo were put on this planet to do stop shi*ting in G.O.D'S face. Or suffer the consequences that have nothing to do with me. And are only the result of your own actions and choices. No one forced you to make rhis evil. You chise it on your own so prepare to face the consequences of your own actions. Prepare to get violated spit roasted and passed around by demons in the lake of fire. You earned it yourself. You did this to yourself. So enjoy giving brain to demons for eternity or change your ways and maybe just maybe avoid being a plaything for demons.
The demons are going to have a great time with you they are just going to love passing you around. So keep it up keep being an agent of evil. Keep doing the devil's work inserted of G.O.D'S WORK. Instead of the work J.E.S.U.S would have you do. Do you really think G.O.D. and J.E.S.U.S really want you to do this that they are telling you to put this sick demented vile evil filth out into the world. No you're mental. Seek G.O.D seek J.E.S.U.S. you need them you need help. This aint right. Yo are going to get spit roasted by demons because of this sick shi*. Just stop just be better. No one pointed a weapon at you and said you have to put this evil out into the world. There's no rule or law saying you have to be an agent of evil. But you are doing so anyway. You have chosen evil you can choose good at anytime. But becaue you chose evil those demons are waiting for you to make you suffer and have their way with your body. You are doing it to yourself. So stop doing it. And maybe you'll avoid it. maybe.
You are beyond sick to even think this premise is okay. Its not you arw sick in the head heart spirit mind body soul and everything there is. You are sick through and through to even just think tgis goofy stupid braindead disturbing evil premise is okay just because its a story it's fictional. No  that doesnt change that you smeared shi* all over some paper and call it a story. Using that which you wiped with doesnt make a story nevwrmind a good story.

People are supposed to be able to relax to stories and this is disturbing sick wrong mental insane. In real life there's people that would rather not be alive than be changed especially like that. Not just being a monster like a vampire but even switching genders that might seem fun and exciting to you but you are psychotic you have broken from reality.  Somepeople would truly rather not be alive that have that level of change in their lives. You do you and answer to G.O.D and J.E.S.U.S they trolly feel much stronger than I do about it do you think k they will be lenient kind or will they condemn you for your actions your demented writings you could have kept to yourself. But oh no you jylust had to tell the world about your sickness and try to convert them to it. I dont think G.O.D or J.E.S.U.S. Will take kindly to that. I think you have an afterlife of getting passed around by demons giving brain to demons and generally getting violated by demons for eternity. So enjoy. You earned it. Your actions have earned you it.
SO HAVE FUN GETTING YOUR BRAINS FU*KED OUT BY DEMONS IN THE LAKE OF FORE FOR ALL ETERNITY. ENJOY GIVING THEM BRAIN AND BEING PASSED AROUND YOU EARNED IT. WITH YOUR SICK DEPRAVED DEMENTED EVIL WRITING YOU'LL FIT RIGHT IN. STOP BEING EVIL AND YOU JUST MIGJT ESCAPE BEING RA*ED FOR ALL ETERNITY BY DEMONS. YOU DESERVE IT YOU EARNED IT ITS YOUR KARMA YOU MADE BY PUTTING OUT SICK SHI*. YOU DID THAT. HAVE FUN GETTING BENT OVER BY DEMONS FOR ETERNITY AND THEY WONT BE LIKE THE ONES IN ANIME. SKULLS AND GROTESQUE BIZZARE APPENDAGES TENTACLES MONSTERS. ITS GOING TO BE HORRIFIC AND YOU EARNED IT. YOU HAVE NO ONE TO BLAME BUT YOURSELF.
IT DOESNT MATTER THAT ITS A STORY YOU STILL MADE SOMETHING SICK SOMETHING WRONG SOMETHING THAT HAS NO RIGHT WHAT SO EVER TO EXIST AND EVERYTIME YOU ARGUE OR PUT MORE OUT YOU ARE JSUT ARGUING TO LIVE A SICK DEPRAVED LIFE JUST BECAUSE ITS NOT REAL ITS JUST A STORY. YOU BELONG IN A PADDED ROOM WITH A STRAIGHT JACKET FOR ALL TIME. YOU DONT BELONG OUT IN PUBLIC. YOU ARE DEPRAVED. YOU ARE EVIL. AND NO ONE NEEDS IT. NO ONE NEEDS YOUR DEPRAVED EVIL SO STOP WRITING STOP DRAWING. YOU CANT WRITE TO SAVE YOUR LIFE SO GIVE UP. YOU CANT WRITE YOU HAVE NO SKILL. ALL YOU DO IS MAKE SICK SHI*. YOU HAVE NO PLACE IN THIS WORLD WHER YOU BELONG IS HE*L. THEY LIKE YOUR SICK SH*T THERE. BUT NOT HERE. STOP BEING EVIL STOP PUTTING YOUR EVIL INTO THE WORLD. YOU GET WHAT YOU GIVE AND YIUR GETTING BACK SICKNESS AND DEPRAVITY EVIL BECAUSE YOU PUT OUT EVIL.  SO ENJOY GETTING SKULLFU*KED BY DEMONS FOR ALL ETERNITY. YOU EARNED IT. YOU DID IT. ITS YOUR KARMA.
YOU ARE SICK IN THE HEAD HEART MOND SPIRIT SOUL BODY AND EVERYTHING THERE IS. NOT 1 PART OF YOUR BEING IS OKAY YOU ARW SICK THROUGJ AND THROUGH. STOP WRITING STOP PUTTING OUT THIS EVIL. SERIOUSLY BEFORE ITS TOO LATE BEFORE YOU GET PUNISHED BEFORE YIU GET LOCKED IN THE LAKE OF FIRE AND DEMONS SPIT ROAST YOU, PASS YOU AROUND YEAH AN ETERINITY OF  GIVING BRAIN TO DEMONS. THEATS WHAT YOUR EARNING FOR YOURSELF BY DOING EVIL. YEAH YOU DEMENTED SICK DEPRAVED CREATURE. THE WORLD WOULD BE A BETTER PLACE WITHPIT ALL OF THIS EVIL IF YOU COULD JUST KEEP IT TO YOURSELF INSTEAD OF LETTING IT OUT I TO THE WORLD YOU MIGJT BE OKAY BUT MAKE BO. ISTAKE YOU ARE GETTING FU*KED BY DEMONS FOR ETERNITY YOU EARNED IT YOU EARNED IT BY MAKING THIS BEYOND SICK DEPRAVED EVIL CANT EVEN BE CALLED WRITINGS.  YOU ARE EVIL. STRAIGHT EVIL AND I LOOK FORWARD TO TO DAY YOU ARE SUFFERING IN THE LAKE OF FIRE AND I NO LINGER HAVE TO DEAL WITH YOU. YOU SICK DEPRAVED DEMENTED CREATURE. GO PLAY IN TRAFFIC GO DRIBK THE CHEMICALS UNDER THE SINK. THE WORLD DOESNT NEED EVIL SICL DEMENTED DEPRAVED THINGS. THATS LIKE DO WE NEED MORE FLOODS AND DROUGHT MORE MURDER TORTURE GREED AND THISE SORT OF THINGS NO NO WE DONT. NO ONE NEEDS THOSE THEIR EVIL WRONG NOT OKAY.
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