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ritsu🐈‍⬛
3 years ago

i said chapter zero but it didnt show uppepe sticker

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Lord 😭 after many chapters i still dont understand anythingg.. should i not have skipped chapter...

so hi everyone.. i typed down all the grammar mistakes(maybe not really) so here

that right! is the day that you waiting waiting waiting!(wow theres expressions here but not in the other word boxes?. you keep messing up in "thats right!" plus missing words and weird af)
im not that expected(sounds wrong)
dont make fun of lady(same thing from underneath)
are you ready lady?(it sounds wrong, put "my" after "lady"
master will be right away(missing words)
why are you stop saying?(g**.. change "are" to "did" change "saying" to "talking")
ive already called so many times(this is the era where theres no phones?)
we are flying on the sky(it also sounds wrong and put "we're" instead of the whole word)
we come already?(change come to arrived)
welcome everyone come to geungukje(idk i js think it sounds wrong)
is that mircaulous?(mircaulous ladybug lol)
that right, really really really like.(put some expressiopns?)
abel is keeping home(so basically theyre homeless now?/j lol)
that for having wiped hand on ladys cheek!(wtf..)
so lady have fun.(not cleaned)
can go there now(missing words)
that right, that giant carved wood doll could move was thanks to magic("that right" "could move was thanks to magic")
like geungukje, the duke in the west was slowly arrived( arrived is present tense and was is past tense) 
oh my, you are a very lovely guest(not really bad but try putting "you're" and other more words like this to make it look expressive.)
our shop can give you a try of our powdered.(powdered what? if you want to make it look like shes gonna yell the powdered something out loud put more dots)
and that turned into a delicious cookies.("a" is used for singular but "delicious cookies" is plural)

This is actually sad, it doesnt matter even if jaeryun n the blackhead hooked up, you can still be sa’d eitherway. (If i misused sa sorryy im not fully known with sa n sh

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Honeychicken Glazed
3 years ago

Out of topic hut its my forst time seeing a comment 21 seconds ago

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In chapter 75, wangyi was in a coma and got only a few bones left and t...

Hopefully you'll be back.. ive been waiting for maybe 1-2 months but no pressure tho.. i miss skylar and cirrus + i want minwoo n skylar to meet again

m-melissa.. how are you so... MAJESTIC DASHING GORGEOUS BEAUTIFUL HEAVENLY EYE CATCHING ALLURING ATTRACTIVE BEWITCHING GLAMOROUS IRRESISTIBLE TASTY DIVINE EXQUISITE PREPOSESSING MAGNIFICENT DELIGHTFUL APPEALING STUNNING BEGUILING PLEASING AND ENGAGING!!!! shes so pretty n handsome idk what to pick...

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