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Commented on The Blooming Violet in the Back Garden - Ch. 87 months ago

Not to be rude, but, shouldn't the FL feel more traumatized? The writing itself is good, but, the human emotions are very complex we know that—But, if it were me, a 5-10 year old child, I'd feel traumatized, watching my "sisters" Get slaughtered and killed in front of me, especially since as an "orphan" They were the only family I had. Overall, the writing is good, just need to add more "relaistic" Emotions, and also, I hope the FL get her justice soonpepe sticker

Replied to @Raon_Mir in In My Bad - Ch. 61 year ago

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