Comment by thicknick76 on Dungeon Odyssey - Chapter 95

Comment on ChapterDungeon Odyssey - Chapter 95
So, after 15 chapters we are going to move forward with this story... they dedicated over 15% of the story to show his background where we already knew a.) He was the sole survivor and made it to the surface, b.) He had a down gem inside him, c.) He awakened it. Essentially all of this chapter was confirming what was already known, save for a few details like where his name came from.

In fairness, the first few chapters we got some lore about how human born underground lived and what captured humans work on, and in this chapter we finally got the pay off. But there had to be 10 chapters dedicated to his escape which we knew beforehand was going to be successful but no one else survived....
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@John Paul Balidoy I'm saying it's fluff and filler. The outcome was already known. This easily could've been 10 chapters shorter and nothing in the plot would be affected. We could be 10 chapters into the actual story instead of rehashing old plot points.

I admit, and put in my original post, that the first few chapters of this flashback were good, we learned about life underground. But the chase sequence was overly drawn out and was distracting the story, considering how long it was.
@thicknick76 its a flashback so he can see how he awakened so its required to show how they escape cause thats when he awakened if not then whats the use of the suggestion of the leader of the failures? u get my point?
@John Paul Balidoy yeah and I agree, it's just been drawn out way longer than necessary. We could be 5 to 10 chapters further into the story rn, but instead we got a bunch of filler.