@styxtnia Pt1
I get that (as I said in my previous comment). I have read the whole story so far and I don't want to burden anyone with my OWN opinion.
All I am saying is that there are ample of stories following a similar plot line, but very few actually are able to create a situation where the fm is not suffering from chronic victim syndrome. Also I don't understand why her overly kind personality should be paired with childlike aloofness and naivety? There are quite a few examples where writers think that combining the two (kindness and naivety) makes the best formula for a FM? Also why do personality traits such as resourcefulness and cunningness (when it comes to female characters) should evoke negative connotations and be used mainly for the personification of villains or not so positive characters? I think that mixing purity with immaturity and infantilism is the wrong way to go.
I get that (as I said in my previous comment). I have read the whole story so far and I don't want to burden anyone with my OWN opinion.
All I am saying is that there are ample of stories following a similar plot line, but very few actually are able to create a situation where the fm is not suffering from chronic victim syndrome. Also I don't understand why her overly kind personality should be paired with childlike aloofness and naivety? There are quite a few examples where writers think that combining the two (kindness and naivety) makes the best formula for a FM? Also why do personality traits such as resourcefulness and cunningness (when it comes to female characters) should evoke negative connotations and be used mainly for the personification of villains or not so positive characters? I think that mixing purity with immaturity and infantilism is the wrong way to go.
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