@JAXX X
Great storyline; the development is well done. I just mean the dialogue feels very artificial and surface level. Everything they say sounds really awkward. I don’t think I’m being overly harsh, and I don’t mean to criticize the author, it's just an observation/my opinion.
Great storyline; the development is well done. I just mean the dialogue feels very artificial and surface level. Everything they say sounds really awkward. I don’t think I’m being overly harsh, and I don’t mean to criticize the author, it's just an observation/my opinion.
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