The dialogue is so plain it makes the story extremely boring the characters have no personality
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Comment by Han on Sharpe and Rabbit - Chapter 65
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@Han are you so so so fr rn? Im actually so shocked someone has a comment on this series,no genuinely? This series has great character development,not to mention a good story line? You can see how Mr.s start to slowly care for AJ and become attached? Great storytelling and also even tho the series takes place in a strip club we dont see much intimate chapters yet it still keeps you attracted. If you read any other BL you'll probably see sËX in the first chapter. I dont understand how you think its dull,but I guess opinions?
@JAXX X blud it is his opinion
@JAXX X
Great storyline; the development is well done. I just mean the dialogue feels very artificial and surface level. Everything they say sounds really awkward. I don’t think I’m being overly harsh, and I don’t mean to criticize the author, it's just an observation/my opinion.
Great storyline; the development is well done. I just mean the dialogue feels very artificial and surface level. Everything they say sounds really awkward. I don’t think I’m being overly harsh, and I don’t mean to criticize the author, it's just an observation/my opinion.