Comment by Midnight_Gardens on The Villainess Hides Her Wealth - Chapter 22

Comment on ChapterThe Villainess Hides Her Wealth - Chapter 22
There is a bi*** named Lyrica and she is prone to hysteria,
brother is a di**,
and father is a fake...
Never in a million years will I be happy for them
Our protagonist is Yuria and she is the sun moon stars and galaxy for us all
Down with Lyrica 
Down with the brother
Down with the father 
Uplift the mother
Uplift the prince
Uplift the princess
And await the glory of the protagonist..

Poem of how much I like the protagonist and hate the sister.

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@Midnight_Gardens  
Let me try and smooth it out for ya
there's a bi*** name lyrica
She's prone to hysteria
the brother is a di**
father is fake
the suffering will know no end on no date
our mc is yuria that shines so bright
Cosmic no burns, just warmth from the light
down with lyrica 
down with brother
down with the father, 
the fiacne will die, alone, drunkenly
uplift the mother
uplift the princess
uplift the prince
We will read her path to victory.
 Try to make it flow a lttile more naturally like a power and better rhyming schem
@Kneecaps  
This was a rush job poem that was made on the fly with immediate inspo.
However thanks for the critique!!!!!
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