Comment by Kneecaps on Midnight_Gardens

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@Midnight_Gardens  
Let me try and smooth it out for ya
there's a bi*** name lyrica
She's prone to hysteria
the brother is a di**
father is fake
the suffering will know no end on no date
our mc is yuria that shines so bright
Cosmic no burns, just warmth from the light
down with lyrica 
down with brother
down with the father, 
the fiacne will die, alone, drunkenly
uplift the mother
uplift the princess
uplift the prince
We will read her path to victory.
 Try to make it flow a lttile more naturally like a power and better rhyming schem

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@Kneecaps  
This was a rush job poem that was made on the fly with immediate inspo.
However thanks for the critique!!!!!
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