Comment by NeverWhere on illusion

@illusion At the beginning this story was gold, there where hard situations but it was more or less menageable and it was credible, now is an avalanche of impossible situation meant to engorge the reades so they focus on the beloodbath an little else.

I'm sure you willlike other work like Pick Me Up, where the same thing happen a lot, i loathe it cause in the end the author end up in using useless deus ex machina and forced situations to solve things... just link in this arc wherei n the end things happened just cause it was needed.

If you can't see it better for you, you will ike much more works but i have read too much until now, so many things that i am become picky and i can see the receipe for disaster and this last arc is exactly that.

Not that i dump extremely basic work, even some bad ones, but i see they problem and acept them and i see even more a wonderful work that slowly start to go bad like this one, Pick Me Up, The Greatest Estate Developer (only in the last part) and more.