Comment by S 1 on Cry, Even Better If You Beg - Chapter 42

@S 1 The trash will undergo character development. I am not defending Mathias, but love to him is like a baby trying to crawl. He doesn't know about it cause he has never seen anyone expressing it around him. He had no such influence. Kyle is obsessed with Layla. Layla doesn't love him; her plan was to be his friend forever but she fears to lose him and has to compromise. Layla just want to be with her uncle and live a simple life. So, Mathias' messed up love and Kyle's obsession are nooses around her neck. In this novel,the only people I pity is Layla and her uncle. They just want to live as a happy family, together. But two men are going to destroy that 🥹🥹🥹

@Ruuty Here’s a refined version with correct grammar and smoother phrasing:
I partly agree with you, especially about Layla and Uncle Ben—they deserve to be happy. However, Kyle is not obsessed with her; he’s simply in love with her, and it’s normal to want to be with the person you love. He didn’t force her to marry him, even though he insisted every day, but his intention was never to pressure her.
Mathias, on the other hand, is obsessed with her. Yes, he doesn’t know how to love, but that doesn’t excuse the actions he’s going to take later. Forcing her to kiss him was already disgusting enough—we can’t justify it by saying, “It’s all new to him.” He has a deep contempt for Layla.
I don’t hate him, but at this stage of the story, I despise him. I’m waiting to see his character development, which could easily be messed up.

English isn't my first language so I used chat gpt to get me the right grammar so don't mind if there incoherences

@S 1 Kyle asking Layla to marry him despite knowing that she will reject him is being persistently annoying. That's pressure on its own. Why would you ask something a million times knowing the answer is no... that's like not taking a hint. And I am not defending Mathias for the kiss. It was uncalled for. But for a man who can't even identify his emotions shows that he lacks emotion intelligence stemming from what he experienced as a child. He doesn't even know what he feels for Layla and why he feels that. And with his father's history,he is only doing what his father did; making a mistress out of poor Layla. I have read the novel and I won't spoil it for anyone,but there will be a part where both Layla and Mathias will be toxic to each other. A toxic relationship that is idolized as love. The author is so messed up.

@S 1 Sweety,I don't mind at all❤️