Comment by The Incognito Guy on Uta

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@Uta
The above poem shows
a little girl's life
potrays her wantings and what suffice
her lines do glow
not for show-
wanting to live a simple life
is what the gods owe (gods owe to girl, to give her a simple life)-
to her trying her best to write 
whether the lines are in her sight

i dont know whether its her mind
or an ai generated verse
well, even to get tht u need a prompt rehearsed

@Uta i would like to know
wht made you started to write in poetic flow
was it for expression? or its just a game
well, either be it but both could be same

well, idk what to do
i read mangas everyday
and dont have a to-do
life sucks as the teen's day
when school's gone 
there come holidays
holidays which brought joy when i was child
are now taking up a lot of ma mind
the friends and the village i used to go
are buried deep right out of my window-
a garden full of joy and fun
isnt there cus i live and waste
my precious time instead of 
studying,reading,learning or having fun (in moderate)
before the start of adult phase

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@The Incognito Guy Amazingggg😍
As well, i'm sorry but these poems aren't mine. I mean, i started to write poems not long ago, but they still need a lot of polishing. Though, when they become good enough for display, i' ll put them here, and i would really like to hear your opinion.
So please wait for me!🙂