Comment by Stardust on Rk

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@Rk 500 years ago things isn't as transparent as it seems as everything in the future was fabricated to the point that it seems unreal and the whole thing about a demon whose name is exactly like MC's, so it isn't that unlikely that demons are involved. 
But I do understand that it is annoying that it isn't a rivalry between families/brothers. But idk why you said childish as their families are still rivals but if they don't do anything about the rivalry mc has with him then for me, yes it's childish
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@Stardust I mean that the rivalry is very, very superficial, almost like a sport one. They are gathering from time to time for duels and some c** measuring but they still joke around and don't go for each other's heads. At no point I feel worried about MC, always his mommy shows up, his uncle shows up, his rivals guard shows up, the dude has an insanely thick plot armor and again, the series feels... bland now.