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@The Incognito Guy  How Do I Weave Emotion in a Song?
I've asked this question far too long—
How do I bare what's deep inside,
And let my soul no longer hide?
 
My spirit sleeps in shadows deep,
Awake it now from dreamless sleep.
Let thunder crack the silent sky,
And teach my heart how to cry.
 
A spark of love—I long to feel,
Something honest, pure, and real.
To flood this hollow, aching shell,
And break the silence where I dwell.
 
O muses watching from above,
Hear my plea, and send me love.
Release your dove, so light, so strong—
And help me finally finish this song.

So here's first song i ever wrote.
It' s sounds old but i like to write this way. You are first to read so please be honest.As well, sorry for not posting, exams got to me.