Comment by deleted user on The Empress’s Beast Selection - Chapter 19

Comment on ChapterThe Empress’s Beast Selection - Chapter 19
deleted user
deleted userMember·1 year ago(edited)
Wtffff with the ML...."I'll have ALL this super important information, but i will tell it when the time is right"

I'm sorry... what?! 
There's a psycho emperor killing beasts 
He's trying to ra** the FL 
ML knows how dangerous/unstable the husband is and will become since they know ML is the real alpha 
There's a mistress who wants FL gone

There's so much fuc**** danger and this man is holding the info because what? Because the writer is too fuc**** stupid and lazy to create a better reason than.....

"ahhh... I'll tell you later because even if I know everything that could save you right now, for some reason I need to wait for things to get worse so I can jump in like a hero and reveal my true secret identity EVERYONE already knows, but they better act like it's the biggest plot twist ever" 

This is such an amaaaaazing idea of a story that's been slowly fuc*** by a terrible writer
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@deleted user comment was funny up until the writer part. their just trying to make it intresting. this is a slow burn/drama romance what do you execpt? their gonna do things that are gonna make you mad pepe sticker im sorry but thats jus the way it is......
@OtakauHERE 😂 As a professional writer with a master's degree in literature, I can confidently say that this is shìt, lazy writing. 

I understand the concept of slow burns; however, if you, as a writer, can't write a better reason for the slow burn other than "I have all you need, but I'll tell you later," then your writing is absolute shít.

If he can't tell her everything now, the writer should have created a logical reason why:

-The seal can't be located if others know ML's identity 

-ML knows if FL finds out about everything she will die because the emperor will have nothing to lose. 
So ML needs to be in power to kill the emperor before she knows anything. 

-There's a curse that prevents him from showing his true self until he holds the seal

Etc.... etc... there are soooooo many ways to make a slow burn that's not... well... I guess I'll tell you later.
Agamenom Posh
Agamenom Posh·1 year ago
@deleted user for real bro! U should write one of this cuz I'm tired of reading the same boring excuses when it's obvi what's gonna happen 
This is no slowburn it's just slow