@Uncle Buck Well, that is the fate of every story, to be bound by morals and tropes. The talentless overpowering the prodigies by his sole hardwork is the most primal story archetype there is. The flamboyant victory of the underdog. Almost every story out there follow this. Even the prodigy ones need to be portrayed in an unfavorable situation to overcome, or else there wouldn't really be a story to tell, really.
Pretty sure you don't dislike this aspect of the story as much as you say you do, I suspect you'd actually dislike it way more if it hadn't any trace of it. What's unpleasant is the overbearing repetitions, since every other dialogue line mentions it.
On the other hand, keep in mind you complain about the dialogues of other characters serving the plot by being used as commentator on the situation at play, if they truly had objective and rational analysis of the situation it would be real weird. So, of course, what author wants to comment through their characters needs to be tainted by their personality, point of view, knowledge or lack thereof, and all.
Pretty sure you don't dislike this aspect of the story as much as you say you do, I suspect you'd actually dislike it way more if it hadn't any trace of it. What's unpleasant is the overbearing repetitions, since every other dialogue line mentions it.
On the other hand, keep in mind you complain about the dialogues of other characters serving the plot by being used as commentator on the situation at play, if they truly had objective and rational analysis of the situation it would be real weird. So, of course, what author wants to comment through their characters needs to be tainted by their personality, point of view, knowledge or lack thereof, and all.