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@TOTCF I can see where you are trying to come from but it doesn't apply here.. he never showed interest in dating her from the get go although the author had the full set up for them to build a relationship in a romantic sense the author didn't until now which is completely out of no where... readers are understandably blindsided by it due to him never showing romantic interest in her at all. In way was she portrayed as a good girl in the story.. a good friend.. yes but a good girl in the sense of how you mean it. No. The romance seems forced and rushed like of course we wanted to see him have some romance eventually after seeing his mom get a happy ending but not forced like how it's happening now ya know.

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@Ian2anean.Unfiltered you are trying to defend something without any kind of actual evidence.  And failing at it. You say 'author full set to build up' but that was exactly the problem. IT WASNT BUILD UP. The mother romance was build up. This one wasnt. And your 'good girl' argument just seem even more weak and without any base when you can, again, apply that to other 'good girls' like even the now step sister and she is not paired with anyone. 
This 'we wanted to see him have romance' is the biggest misconsection here, specially when you spend literally THE WHOLE STORY WITHOUT A SINGLE ROMANCE.