Comment by sAssBee on Saturday's Master - Chapter 69

Comment on ChapterSaturday's Master - Chapter 69
I usually hate giving bad feedback since I know it's not easy to create a story, but boy... This story possessed immense potential, yet it squandered it in the most inelegant manner. As an avid reader and a writer myself, I appreciate stories that defy the clichés. This one could have been one of the best with some fine touches. It's evident that the author lost their way at some point, lacked the ability to refine it, and merely incorporated whatever came to mind. However, I admire their courage in completing it, given the prevalence of stories that end midway. I am not sure which is worse: abandoning a story with a good start or forcing it into a bad one. 😊😂
Anyway, thanks for giving us a good (?) ending. It could have been way worse, folks. 😅

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@sAssBee deadass so many things left unsaid like wtf happen3d to him being engaged and getting married – if I recall directly the whole bs with his bi*** mother and sister was left undone minus that last confrontation. And not to mention the story was dragged on and on in literal circles, nothing was resolved he isn't comfortable with that let's be honest ra**, the sh** he went through at work was left without closure and it sounds like he isn't even working anymore. Pmtfo those rapist never got their comeuppance but glad it didn't pull that stupid sh** where the Mc just so happens to bump into them or a bully in a street out of no where. He didn't grow a spine or anything and still refuses to stand up for himself and acts as if he will die if he uses whatever safety word bs tho I doubt he would've listen tbh. But guess I'm glad it wasn't dragged out for well over 100 chips like so many

Excuse the errors this fuc**** galaxy keyboard Is fuc**** annoying
@Voooo When we come across this kind of story, we all have 'fat fingers' syndrome, lol, no worries. Now that you mentioned it, I forgot about so many parts since all I could remember was his constant crying. He was such a diva. 🙄 We can easily say that NOTHING was solved. 😒 The author seems to have lost interest and just wanted to finish it (to say it nicely 😅).
@sAssBee

I don't think it's lack of interest, it's the realization they made an absolute incompatibile pairing, but still stick to the delusion of the regular "happy ending".

And since any change on MC that makes him deep dive being more and more mazochistic in order of that "happy ending" would justmean his traumas are ruining him, the only solution remains that ML sadistic tenencies magically disappears, which is... well, would be equally terrible from the other side of the spectrum.

They should have just break up, that would be the only logical and desirable outcme of this. to learn where their borders and red lines are, and realize they're not compatible, but with this new knowledge, they can find their right persons in their next relationship. TRHAT would be a real happy ending.

Sad, the author didn't dare to risk the BL rule of endigs. :really sad. :(

@Voooo I loved when Seodan stood up to his sister finally, but I wish the mother had been put in her place too. S
@Voooo I loved when Seodan stood up to his sister finally, but I wish the mother had been put in her place too. S

I loved when Seodan put his sister in her place and stood up for himself. But I wish the mother had been put in her place too. She still blaming Seodan for getting raped because oh he's gay so oh well. She always blaming the victim, embarrased him in front of his  boss/boyfriend, NEVER apologolized to Seodan or tried to make amends. Worst fuc**** mother ever! 

This is why I prefer the beach trip as the ending because Seodan and Juwon actually talked about Seodan's trauma and how Juwon was affected after hearing about it. And it really seemed like Juwon was going to become a better partner and treat Seodan more gently (which the story after the beach totally ruined....for me, other people can have different opinion about it😅)

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@sAssBee

I don't think it's lack of interest, it's the realization they made an absolute incompatibile pairing, but still stick to the delusion of the regular "happy ending".

And since any change on MC that makes him deep dive being more and more mazochistic in order of that "happy ending" would justmean his traumas are ruining him, the only solution remains that ML sadistic tenencies magically disappears, which is... well, would be equally terrible from the other side of the spectrum.

They should have just break up, that would be the only logical and desirable outcme of this. to learn where their borders and red lines are, and realize they're not compatible, but with this new knowledge, they can find their right persons in their next relationship. TRHAT would be a real happy ending.

Sad, the author didn't dare to risk the BL rule of endigs. :really sad. :(

@Lucy OMFG YEEEEEES and the bi*** just standing there with those crocodile tears as if she didn't lie to that hag and say he was living it up like he was Beyonce or something! I wished he would've clocked her in her mouth and the hag as well! You deadass sided with a bunch of rapist and sat there laughing with them saying boys will be boys and wanna play the victim??? I know it happened irl but wished he would've clocked her and dragged the he** out of her.
@Nickname Well, it's not just that. Initial disinterest led to a domino effect of flaws (if we want to identify them; nonetheless, we are not aiming to undermine the author but to evaluate their work). There could be many reasons why they put this story aside, and we can't judge the person—maybe they were sick, had a family member die, or something tragic happened around them. Otherwise, it would have done something to make our diva MC stronger or tried to punish everyone who did wrong to him (or at least I hope 😅).
Their pairing can be compatible with communication—a lot of communication (if we want to keep "the rule of endings"—yet, a separation would have been worse for MC since he already sees himself at the lowest point; another abandonment would have killed him for good). Even if words alone can't fix everything, I have no doubt that ML—big jackass that he is—could have helped MC. In my opinion, the only thing that could have pulled MC out of his dark past was therapy in conjunction with ML's support, given his level of depression. The story would have been half saved, at least, if this had been the last part.
This "ending" is rushed and leaves a lot of things hanging. Still, I appreciate that the author gave MC a happy ending, in their own way.