Terrible writing. The gold tooth loser was talking to her through the freezer door, her dad showed up and the guy was yelling at him at the top of his lugs and she didn't hear that? They also started the fight right outside the freezer and she also didn't hear any of that? Way to much bs just for the sake of plot.
Comment by MarshRat on Manager Kim - Chapter 14
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My guy just fuc**** leave obviously your comments arent going to change the story so just fuc**** LEAVE!!!!???
it's obviously an insulated freezer?? she was sitting at a corner covering her ears so she didn't need to listen to that guy, and the sound only traveled through the door crack?
a freezer door is coated with metal and a couple of inches thick so she wouldn't hear anything plus like he said its raining like he**
Marshrat is right, it's lazy writing. They straight up had a conversation while she was locked up in the freezer. Even if she couldn't hear her dad, her dad could (should have been able to) hear gold teeth negotiating with his daughter before the young beast came along.
It cheapens the story.
@Peaches stfu and stop reading the da** story u waste of ducking space....
@MarshRat and why the he** you still here you fuc**** disappointment..
