Comment by toetiddies on For My Derelict Beloved - Chapter 16

Comment on ChapterFor My Derelict Beloved - Chapter 16

I don't quite understand all that hate towards the crown prince and princess. Sure, they are not great, but they are also not that bad. Just flawed humans like we all. To me it feels like the FLs resolution isn't strong enough to make me interested in her "revenge plan". I'm more interested in the progress in her relationship with the ML. This whole conflict is looking quite silly from my perspective. It's like she blames those people for MLs desicions and his unability to cope and get through the hardships in his life (lives).

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True but i can understand why, Cael did a lot to help them get together but when he killed an aristocrat, the OG FL simply decided that it was crossing the line and abandoned their friendship. Then the OG ML who is supposed to be his friend, did nothing and simply abandoned him too.  He lost his crush and bsf, its hard to lose a crush but even worse, a bsf so it is kinda right for FL to blame them when all ML did was help them but in return got abandoned. I was thinking that the OG FL wasnt to blame since shes the typical naive and innocent one then we met her and i've been thinking that she's the kind  to be used to having ppl like her and cant handle it when the person she rejected simply moved on. And i hate those kind of girls.

You see, he was abandoned by his best friend and love, for only killing the aristocrats who could hurt them, in the end they didn't even care about his condition.
In past chapters, his best friend didn't want him to kill himself because it would make the "saint" cry, that is, he doesn't care about his friend who did so much for him, besides the fact that the "saint" is not so holy so, for she and the church only vision to win them over.

I'm gonna have to reread it, cause maybe I'm not remembering it right. I just feel weird about the main characters resolutions. Also I don't think that there is a clear "good" and "bad" side to this story. MC as a fangirl is quite biased. Plus she experienced the death of her fav character, which was traumatic for her and maybe thats where all that comes from. But still I can't fully stand behind that revenge plan.

i agree! at this point i'm just here to simp over all the characters. story is still quite interesting but i love the characters designs more and can't wait to meet letona!

Just sharing my opinion and thoughts aboit the mc girl, ig she's kinda being a simp now and obsessed with Cael. I know he's her fave character, loves him and appreciate him, like IDK WHY AM I SEEING HER LIKE THIS BUT I LOVE HER AND ITS NOT LIKE ITS A SUPER BAD THING. I MEAN I FEEL HER. I WOULD PROBABLY DO THE SAME but ofc at the same time, I can't because I lack confidence and hate socializing lol

@Baklang ulikba  Ain't no way I'm reading that long a** essays how much free time do you have to write tha