I kept reading this to see if it'll get any better but g** da** the writing in this is horrible...it's like a fifth grader obsessed with bad fanfiction wrote it. The plot is so rushed and everything feels like it's coming out of nowhere while also having all the characters as boring and one dimensional as possible. The brothers have zero chemistry as well, so everything has zero impact and falls flat. Da** shame because the art is so nice.

Baby has a yee-yee a** hair cut but still adorable. So excited for the side chapters, thank you so much to the author for not just leaving us stranded and wanting. For once, we had a redemption story that felt like an actual redemption without the uke completely forgiving the seme for everything. It felt gradual and earned, and I'm so glad Taeju had to work and suffer for love before it was reciprocated.

Author-san really said 'fu** it', lmfaoooo. They didn't even try to end it properly after getting everyone invested in their story, bahahaha. It could have been wrapped up 20+ chapters ago, but Author-san was so focused on nourishing us with po** that they lost track of the actual goal....and ngl I respect that.
Hopefully we get some 'after story' chapters showing their dating life afterward.

So...I was in a severe car crash when I was younger, and the whip lash I got from that accident was still less than what I got from this manga's break-neck pacing, lmao. Still enjoying it, though.

Zinchan translations seriously need to start being banned and treated as spam.

I hate saying this, but this story could have been so interesting if only the manhwa artist knew how to properly pace the plot and character interactions. It feels so abrupt... you can really feel that it's just an action sci-fi and po** manhwa smashed together instead of it working in harmony... Normally I'd be fine with that but here it feels forced because one half of the story is so serious while the other is just...random po**. I don't feel much character chemistry, and I guess that's because our main characters don't really feel like people...I hardly know anything about them, which makes the 'plot' feel pointless. It's a shame because the artist is great at the few fight sequences they've drawn. 😭

I'd love to hear other people's thoughts on this, since it's an issue in most BL attempting to write serious stories. Few seem to succeed (King Maker is a good example of one well done) and it sucks that so many yaoi/BL have so much potential...