I think maybe you need to clarify more of what type of story & the main point/plot of it is. Because I'm struggling a bit to understand the "purpose" you are trying to convey. Why is Mee Young attacking the MC, & the ML? Also I would suggest throughly researching on Schizophrenic Disorders and the spectrum of those. Maybe moving the age of the characters to more college age because I'm pretty sure unless it's like an extreme case, a majority of Dr's. Won't officially diagnose someone as being on the Schizophrenic spectrum until at the earliest 18, but I think many still wait until the pt is at least 25-30 because that's when your brain has finished fully developing & Because there are so many other disorders that can present similar symptoms they have to be sure. The treatment for that can be very very expensive, & intense for the pt. So if they try to treat someone for that & that's not what they actually have it can really mess a person up even more. I think wanting to write about mental health is great & can help break down the misconceptions about it. I just think it's important to make sure you're as informed as you can be so you don't unintentionally add to dangerous stereotypes or misinformation. & I think being able to properly communicate that will help connect readers to your characters and make them genuinely relatable.

I feel like his dad still isn't considering what it is that Gamin wants. They keep deciding for him, without believing in him or letting him decide on his own and encouraging him to succeed and supporting him if he fails. They keep telling him what he CAN'T do.

Home is already 2 for 2. I definitely would not trust him again. Lol

I think it's more of he's obsessed/smitten with Yeonwoo & would do anything for him given the opportunity. But also is trying hard to hold back & not overwhelm him, considering his past trauma. I think Yeonwoo will be the only one to get the puppy side of Kim Shin, cause homeboy definitely is NOT the slightest bit submissive or eager to cater to to anyone else besides Yeonwoo.

But it's not a spoiler. Do y'all not remember the scene where all the other gang members were talking about Damhos passing anniversary how Yosef was going to be upset. Then he was at like his memorial or something.

@Shynn Could you tell me where I can read the novel & what's the name of it please? I never realized so many webtoons had novels to go with them.